Reviews for Carmen
daemonkieran chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
You know, I believe that when a hero starts pushing people away for their 'safety' they show their villainousness side. It shows they do not trust others' independence, capability of logical thought, or ability to stand beside the one you support. if you worry about others, have them trained so that they can protect themselves.

There I go again...with the lectures.

Awesome story, great follow up.
jflowy chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Wow this was so excellent I didnt understand the leguwat first but I lovedtgis story kinda confused but definatly satisfied
Eirien Nimrodel-herves vuin chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
WOW...that was HOT!

Wait a tick...was everyone just standing around while, um...yeah...?


Do I have a watching fetish? *blushes fiercely*

*runs away and hides in shame*
Lara-Lynx chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
OMG! I LOVE IT! Its very well written and realistic... and I like the end, and the beginning, and the middle, okay, I lika all of it! Very good!
JezebelDelilah chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
That was amazing. I've generally gotten burned out on Harry Potter fanfics, but I love this one.

Awesome job with writing it.

PS - There were a few words that were stuck together. That was all I have to say that isn't good.
Chugga Chugga Choo Choo chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Wow, it's long.

I thought it was amazing, you have such a unique and interesting writing style, and the plotline was just superb. Loved it.

Somerandomharrydracofan chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
I 'loved' this! And the fact that the party was on my birthday, 'loved' it even more! ]

I really like how you kept them in love without the promise of forever. That's much too cliche. Very very very well done. D
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
This was very well written. Keep writing!
snappyfixture chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
Aw, I wanted to know what the reactions from the other people on the Quidditch field had to say about their encounter...

'Cause it was right there in front of them, like live porn or something...
Xx-Pandy-Pocky-xX chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
Very well written. I loved your story!
richie chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
ohh..draco reminds me of a little,beautiful demon. Lovin it!
Black Ko chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
Wonderful. Thanks for this story!

PS - I think I'm in love with both of your Draco and Harry.
Lyl chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
A I love your stories!