Reviews for The Lion King 3: The Twins of The Pride
dark-dragmon chapter 2 . 7/29/2010
awesome chey. keep writing i want to know what happens. and o ya. its me lydia
FlowersBeauty chapter 2 . 10/18/2009
Lol I really like this story! I also like the names you picked.
DayDreamerxo15 chapter 2 . 9/6/2009
hey good story! u should check out my lion king story! its a crossover but i'd bet u'd love it!
MarvelHero1610 chapter 2 . 8/28/2009
I love Lion King and I suppose Zira returning would be a major plot twist. continue you meanie lol.
Desray95 chapter 2 . 8/25/2009
Great update. Poor cubs. D*:
Luna Goddess of the Night chapter 2 . 8/13/2009
This was really cute so far with the cubs. I do hope you update soon.

nd, if it's not too much trouble, would you check out a few of my fics? i apologize for how simple they sound. thank you very much.

Zira's back! I hope you do a good job with her character!

Update, lol

wolfdog127 chapter 2 . 8/2/2009

good job chey.
Aquaman52 chapter 2 . 8/1/2009
Good chap...Shenzi sounded a little out of character, but then again she's pretty impossible to keep in character anyway. It's not really a big deal.

Oh, and just a bit of advice for the future: when a character sighs, it's not considered spoken word, so it shouldn't be in quotes. So Kovu's line while he was arguing with Shaka should have looked something like this:

Kovu sighed. "You're right. I'm sorry...I'm just really stressed."

Hope that helps, and keep going!
Desray95 chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
Real good chapter. I'm very interested. UPDATE SOON!