Reviews for Some Disco Loving
morena.davidson.3 chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
I liked the story...you wrapped it up well enough for it to stand as a o/s but it could be expanded and I'd be interested in reading more. Thanks for sharing :)
bellacullen18forever chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
nice lemons!
Curiosity62 chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
It was good! although some things could have been better said...

But all in all, it wasn't bad...
jayne chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
well, i'm not normally one to critize (okay well i totally am) but you really need to proof read and work on your grammar. i mean it was a good plot and everything, you just should have executed it a little better. but, sorry if you think i'm an ass for saying this. just thought i would let you know...
Love-RiniBell-Love chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
I love how Emmett said shake your groove thing. That is such an Emmett term. This was a cute story. I wouldn't mind a continuation.
The Age of Edward chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
We have received your entry! Thank you! Can't wait to read!

- Vixen1836 on behalf of The Age of Edward Contest
MaskedNarnianQueen chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
cool.
Ra4chel-the 4 is silent chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
Next time proofread.
Natarama chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
It was a good idea, but I think you need to reread it, maybe read some other peoples work. Because your wording is just funny and thats probably not what you were going for. Also, take anatomy.
boo chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
It was okay, but the rating definitely doesn't need to be as high as it is...