|Reviews for Relevations Missing Scene|
| Miss Pookamonga chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
Short but sweet :) I love how Nikola was terrified for Helen and how she wasn't prepared to see that-it fit perfectly in context with the characters. Lovely job :)
Miss Pookamonga :-P
| Mousie chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
I liked the story, there are a few spelling mistakes to watch out for, like in the summery - You have spelt one of the characters names wrong, and "She coughed, half chocking on the thick air"...you mean 'choking'. Chocking means something entirely different.
I also felt the ending was a bit abrupt but enjoyed reading it, thank you for posting it.
| ellymelly chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
that was very cute and very squee :D one small thing, i believe his name is spelled, 'Nikola' - but other than that - great little story! :D