Reviews for Brothers in Arms: Recurrence
Mavs7073 chapter 4 . 5/18/2014
Awesome story I like the inclusion of gundam wing earlier in the story as well as calming Kevin down a bit. It's been a few years since you last updated and i hope you return to this story soon it's become one of my favorite stories.
Yua-hime chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
This is my second time reading throuhj these four chapters of Recurrence, but this time I'll actually be able to review.

I really loved the original Brothers in Arms story and I'm very excited that your making a rewrite. I love the extra details. It really helps bring the story alive. The extra character interaction also helps the characters seem more real and the fact that you go more in depth with there thoughts draws us closer to the characters as a whole.

Kira seems to be more observant and know more about Kevin's past, which seems to fit better with them being friends for ten years.

The story also seems to brach off a little more than the original did, which keeps the story less predictable and more enjoyable even though most people reading this already know many of the main plot points.

Your doing a very good job with this story and are probably one of the best authors this site has. I'm really looking forward to when you start putting up the new chapters again. Until then I'll reread the other three chapters and review them.

Thanks a lot for posting this wonderful story.

With regards,
Yua-hime
Twillightfairy chapter 4 . 7/21/2011
In your end notes you said that you didn't intend to leave this for 6 months, it's been about 8 and a half since the last update. I like this story and would like to see what comes next, especially since Kira, Athrun and I'm not sure who all were about to enter battle.
thedarkpokemaster chapter 4 . 7/19/2011
cool story keep it up
Wraith Five chapter 4 . 11/11/2010
Great job! I can't wait to see what happens to Tallgeese, that was a cool MS in Gundam Wing, can't wait to see what you do to it here! Keep it up!

Mr. Gasbomb
Ultimate chapter 4 . 11/9/2010
Hello my friend, it's nice to see another fantastic chapter. As always your writing amazing in every possible way. Like I've said before I seriously hope that write a novel or novels some day as I would buy and read each of them. While my tastes in many things change over the years your stories are one thing I always thoroughly enjoy.

I must admit when I first heard you were doing a re-write I was rather skeptical and unsure if it would be a good idea as I thought the original was one of the best pieces of writing I've ever read. But as always you've created another incredible story, one that I think might even be better than the original. I never doubted the story would be great(which of course it is) I just wasn't sure if you could top the last one(which you did). It's only a few chapters in and already it's amazing.

In conclusion, if you continue to write I will continue to read, my friend. Hopefully I'll be able to see you and the others back on forum at some point in time(if life ever gives me the chance), it certainly has been a long time since I was last there (upwards of a year I believe) so I hope I'm not forgotten. Regardless, once again another incredible chapter to an incredible story.

Ultimate
charles ho chapter 4 . 11/6/2010
Great chapter,Im glad you put Ken in your i didnt expect you add X-9 Ghost in job!

Are you also add VF-25 and VF-27 in your fic?Also any MS from Gundam 00 in yor fic?

Continue your great work and update soon!
Ominae chapter 4 . 11/6/2010
Nice to see you up and about. I don't blame ya. I got 2 uni essays to take care of. That and I'm hanging around in Tv Tropes for RPGs.
EmperorDraco7 chapter 4 . 11/6/2010
Impressive chapter Solid, keep up the good work.
Vandenbz chapter 4 . 11/6/2010
That operative in the beginning sounds interesting, I'm already looking forward to finding her connections to Kevin. This new ship the Marie Curie also looks intriguing, from the sound of it you seem to be using OCs from your Birds of a Feather series. I wonder how Andrei's survival up until this point and the existence of the Ghost mobile armors will affect the coming battle. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
mfmxxx chapter 4 . 11/6/2010
So is this is a Cagalli x Kira or a Cagalli x Kevin?

Awesome chapter and exceelent detail.
FraserMage chapter 4 . 11/5/2010
Kei Nagase, really? Nice random out of nowhere AC:5 reference.

Ok "Boss" What are you up to. Initiative? Sounds awfully like something like your old True ZAFT exists in this universe too.

X-9 Ghost? Really? Bowman Station? Really? Hmm, I think you have been watching Macross Plus again. Manned Ghost? How did "The Boss" get his hands on it.

Hmm, Good chapter.
Zaru chapter 4 . 11/5/2010
I'd read your Persona fics. But ya, great chapter.

Is this the introduction of the Marie Curie?

Also, I was wondering if I would like your advice on a Gundam SEED idea I am working on with my friend. Interested?
Infinite Freedom chapter 4 . 11/5/2010
Good to see more of your work, Solid. When you said A.I. machines my mind instantly went to Mobile Dolls. So Zoanthrope have a retarded aging? What did the ABADDON project do that removed it? Would I be correct in assuming that the Tallgeese will eventually be passed down to someone else? Finally, I regret to inform you that I will not be reading the Persona story. It's nothing personal, I just don't like the Persona series.
Wraith Five chapter 3 . 10/27/2010
one minor issue, then i'll get to the good stuff:

CENTRIFUGAL FORCE DOES ***NOT*** EXIST!

okay? (easiest way to fix would be to say "laws of motion/physics" or something like that...

okay, now...THE GOOD STUFF!

yay for Tallgeese! and great job with the new plot elements! i REALLY can't wait for the next update!
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