Reviews for Kaleidoscope
theshysmartgirl chapter 1 . 4/28/2014
Cuteness!
Dandy352 chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Cute!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
The idea was rare...and it was interesting...
ninalasvegas chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
Oh my goodness. I LOVED THIS. Seriously, I loved this. You should write more of these, okay? LOVED. This.
of sporks and stars chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
Luv it!
booknerd3000 chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
that was so adorable! and your writing is amazing :) i love the detail you went into without overdoing it.
SuperSpy chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
This one-shot is incredibly adorable and awesome, and laugh-inducing. I'm serious. I actually burst out laughing while reading it (and I startled my dog, which earned me a rather reproachful look).

"At that moment, the dormitory door swung open excitedly—why all the dormitory things suddenly had feeling, he didn't know, but he was suddenly worried he was going piss the mattress off if he kept sitting on it—and Sirius Black walked through the door."

Hands down, favourite line. Although there were many others that came close. :)

Marvellous job!
CapacityForWings chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
Smiled through the whole thing. Lovely!
ShIvErInG sMiLe chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
"I bought a comb!" LOL Funniest line ever.

Very good story, light, funny and different. I enjoy it lots
wickedosity335 chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
aaw how cute. ] lol

i personally like the clock. P tehehhe
Lorelai the Coffee Slayer chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
How did you do it?

Two EPIC one-shots in one week?

It was awesome.

James and Lily are written exactly how I think they should be.

It was great! XD
fattoad chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
That was good! I was kinda confused when James shouted 'WHAT?' and went back to read over the last paragraph haha.
UndeniablyMe chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
This was a good attempt, it made me laugh. I thought it was great! :)

-UndeniablyMe
BettyCrocker chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
OMG I loved that! I was so sure that Lily was going to ask him out and I was thinking that it would just be another happy thing but I was so surprised when she didn't! I'm going to go read it again! :D