Reviews for The Day After Breaking Dawn
Scylla's revenge chapter 1 . 6/14/2016
I know this is super old now but it's just perfect!
The fact that it's labeled under "horror" just makes it even better.
nanayoung chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
The.Ocean.Shadow chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
V Tsuion chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
Nice! This is what their relationship really would be like. It makes me feel sorry for Edward, of all people. Job well done!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
SlashMyDreams chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Very accurate! I'd say poor Edward, but I don't think I like him enough for that. This was brilliant.
Raogrhys chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Hahahaha! Lol nice!
prettypurple chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Hilarious! I loved it.
EntrappedInACageOfMyOwnMaking chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
I loved this fic, the only problem is Bella's eyes would be either red or gold not brown. Besides that i loved it!

A very small part of me feels pity for him, the rest is laughing I told you so! I mean if he was able to hear her thoughts from the start we wouldnt have be subjected to all this crap, no matter how chocolatey and bacony she smells.
Melissa Treglia chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
I came here due to a rec from someone at the LJ comm TwiSpiteFic.

"The Day After..." actually parses in my brain as less horror and more humor... because it's completely, hilariously true. Bella really DOESN'T have a thought in her brain beyond how "hot" Edward is.

So well done.
Padfoot Reincarnated chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
Funny! Poor Edward. Well, he does kind of deserve it...
Ruan Chun Xian chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
"Edward smiled grimly. He missed that shield."

Oh Edward. Hahahaha.

I can't say I pity him, really. If only he could hear her thoughts from the beginning, we'd be spared the whole series, no matter how bacon-y her blood smells.

Great story! :)
Marie Nomad chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
Poor Edward. Be careful what you wish for. Yup. The guy can't even ask her to put up the shields any more since it would be awkward. I could imagine him snapping one day and screamed, "Can't you have a single interesting thought in that empty head of yours?"

Anyway, this is funny. Why did you put it under 'horror'?
Blue-Inked Frost chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
This was absolutely hilarious and very in character for all concerned. *g* Bravo! Very well done indeed. :D
xXxMartelxXx chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
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