Reviews for Behind his Smile
otaku908 chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
B-but...Epilogue is after and Prologue is supposed to be before!
Kyoki no Kage chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
...i almost cried...

this story was so deep... i dont know how you did it... but i was tearing by the time i was done reading...

... good job...

it was really a good work of writing...
LaueHime chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Sad in a beautiful way :)
Silver-Creasent-MOON1995 chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Very good but one thing the start the like the back story before the story is a prolougue the epilougue is at the end
Saw is sad chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
so sad so good
Hatake Tsughi chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
Man I was not expecting that you made me cry.
cirrat chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
uhm... The story is nicely written and all, but you've mixed up the "prologue" and "epilogue" - Prologue is at the beginning and epilogue is at the end ;)
lambtastic chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
aww... that was sad:( but great story. i liked how you wrote it.
dragongirl5k5 chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
Whoops...I just noticed after someone pointed out that I switched prologue with epilogue.

Sorry readers!

I guess this wat happens when you post a story at 3am. Anyway thank you to all who reviewed!
StarSpew chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
too sad...I sob...sob...

I'm going to put this into my communiityty...

sob
Rena the pirate jedi wizard chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
Man, this almost made me cry. It was a really well written fiction. I do want to ask though, did you mean to put the epilogue at the beginning and the Prologue at the end? It's usually the other way around. I really liked the emotions and how you managed to incorperate so many of the characters into the story. The end was very sad, but fullfilling. Thank you