Wow. Not only is your writing superlative, but this was hot as hell! Lol.

And probably the most amusing thing about this whole one-shot is the fact that Wakka and the other blitzballers thought that the statement we readers know to be truth was just Lulu's idea of a joke.

I love this story I'v read it twcis and it lafed me wet the first time I did. Thats how you knew if a unconnred love story is good. I kinda have a quagihen to ask in the story whan lulu askes Kimahri if he had ever done this before and he indakaed a no did that mine he was a virgen or just evener done it with a hunmen before?

Nice!

oh wow *drool & nose bled* u sure know how to write wow! the details and the way u wrote them it was beautiful and poetic (idk how) but still this story is very well written bravo! i also laughed at the last part where lulu wobbles a bit after the whole you know lol