|Reviews for Locked Up|
| LesleyLunaCullen chapter 3 . 10/14/2016
You lost me...it's only chapter 3 and Bella kisses and inmate and calls it a bold move? I guess she looking to get fired, that's the kind of reaction she would get. There wasn't even time to build up any chemistry but she's going to throw her career away because she "thinks" he's innocent? Not likely! Now, if she knew he was Alice's brother and felt some sort of obligation to help him? I could possibly see her getting overly familiar eventually but she has no business working in a prison if this is her solution to counseling her patients. Second, her "best friends" failed to reveal that both of them have brothers incarcerated at Eclipse Penatentiary? Bella must be the most untrustworthy friend who ever lived! Oh, hey Bella, that prisoner you are so keen on meeting? Ya, I forgot to tell you he's my brother who I obviously haven't gone to see since his trial? Oh and Rose's brother is a major drug trafficker and he's there too. He got 20 years...oh wait, Jaspers sentence was never mentioned can I take a guess and say he will have the shortest trafficking sentence known to man so we can force the "cannon couples"? Sorry I am being a smart ass but this story has so much potential and to make Bella a professional (who was doing a pretty shitty job as a therapist in the first place but that's besides the point), her job is to rehabilitate or help men in prison, not to figure out the social hyararchy and not to free wrongful convictions prisoners. If that's the arch then make her a lawyer who overturns wrongful convictions as a private attorney. I was really trying to give this story a chance but I can't continue because I would have to assume (A) Bella is the dumbest person on the planet and cares nothing about herself (B) that her friends hate her (C) that Edward isn't a manipulative ass hole, just misunderstood (D) that there is an attraction for no apparent reason. I was trying to ignore the prison inconsistentcy but I can't keep going when the characters have no character. I will try another one of your stories
| LesleyLunaCullen chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
Pretty good I work in a prison and I don't know if it's 100% accurate as far as the top dog mentality because gangs are the true top dogs and 4-5 inmates would just beat the shit out of him to get their point across but I know this is fiction so I'm going where you are I have enjoyed your other stories so bring on PrisonWard lol
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
Love your a story
| Ladydeath1500 chapter 12 . 4/20/2016
Dam that is now two of your stories that I really like that are not finished that sucks
| LostInASeaOfPeople chapter 12 . 6/27/2015
Ever going to update here?
| awesomefairytale chapter 12 . 4/22/2015
Hi, I love this story... è davvero commovente, la adoro. will you finish it? I hope you do because I can't wait to read what happens next. thank you for sharing your writing.
| xXtWiLiGhTcRaZyXx chapter 12 . 7/30/2013
I really loved this story and wish you had continued it. I checked on The Writer's Coffee Shop library and it wasn't there so I was hoping you may update the rest of the story sometime soon.
| Jasveen chapter 12 . 7/4/2013
hi will u be updating this story.
i couldnt find anything on TWCS as well?
| Mz-Star chapter 3 . 11/7/2012
Squeals! Yay she gave him a peck! Woot woot
| aAnnalise chapter 12 . 10/31/2012
Love your story. Just went over to the coffee shop and this story isn't there. Are you planning to post it soon? Let me know.
| win63 chapter 12 . 10/18/2012
Love this story it's brilliant. Have looked at TWCS and can't find this story, hope it continues either on FF or TWCS.
| Darcyfan14 chapter 5 . 6/29/2012
What's going on?
| Darcyfan14 chapter 4 . 6/29/2012
What is it that Emmett's found out?.
OMG I can't wait.
| Darcyfan14 chapter 2 . 6/29/2012
Did Alice know how this Cullen is? as his brother?
| Darcyfan14 chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
I want to know more about why Edward is in jail for.I s Tanya has something to do with, And let see how Bella handle Edward.