|Reviews for Fate's Gambit|
| shizkane chapter 9 . 7/23
Fuck I suffer all the damn chapter thinking that all the parents were dead! I was hanging in every word and I'm surprised that Rita had a backbone and be a true journalist. Also dumbuldore with that intetn is even more enemy that fucking voldy!
| shizkane chapter 6 . 7/23
I'm hoping maia don't die because it will break my heart
| Alwin-nl chapter 3 . 7/4
Fun read but that last sentence was simply brilliant!
| WiltsRider chapter 9 . 5/3
Very well written pre-hogwarts tale. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Many thanks for your time writing this.
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/29
The way Dumbledore was handled was probably the biggest issue with this story.
It doesn't matter what the legal trials say. All that needed to be done was for Harry to make a public announcement stating he would walk away from the magical world as long as Dumbledore held any position of power and he's done.
After all, even if you ignore all the other manipulations and bullshit; Dumbledore just tried to kill Luna's mother.
| wtf chapter 2 . 4/29
why you alway put bush bitch with harry fuck that dumb whore bitch needs to be bashed and put in prison so noone hear about her again
| odonnellzoo99 chapter 8 . 4/13
I'm glad you chose to write FG2. This is a very good and relatively short story. The addition of FG2 just made the two combined even better.
Thank you for writing.
| mumphie chapter 8 . 3/11
Once again, doing a reread for the umtheenth time. Love your writing skills, and how you weave a story. Just disagree with how Fate thinks that the scales need to be balanced, when they have been imbalanced for ten years. giving good things would only make it even, not only for Harry, but for the lonely girls too. Yes, the girls have loving parents, food, clothes, and beds to sleep in, but beyond that they were friendless and felt alone. A balancing should be a good thing, not a bad.
Guess I just hate it when bad things happen to good people, even if they are fictional.
| Cindy Reilly chapter 4 . 3/9
I just wanted to point out that you have saying instead of staying.
| Fantasylover101 chapter 9 . 2/9
Loved this, going to ready FG2 now
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/4
I would f**k DumbleAss...in the a$$...with a rusty nail until he was drooling copper. I hope this is the story where you KILL that motherfucker.
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/4
You'd best murder dumbleass in the next story
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/4
Oh NOOOO! I'm at the part where the scars are revealed and her saying potions lab...please, pleeeease don't let it be.
| wiebenor chapter 9 . 2/1
Definitely wish that it idk, was longer or something, as the kids practically get married and then the story abruptly ends in epilogue fashion, but it was a good story nonetheless, and I'm looking forward to seeing the sequel mentioned at the end, where hopefully, some of the last second plot bits, especially the Sirius Black visit are promptly taken care of in the beginning of the next book...
Again, good story, and I hope more good stories like this come about although, I hope the next story or stories in this series, are a bit less sad as even though I expected it I wasn't really ready for losing Mr lovegood nor Mr Granger... Oh well, I guess it was inevitable, with the scales needing to be balanced, or at least balanced enough, if the comment about putting certain things on someone else's balance sheet is correct, although balance sheet wasn't the word the author used, I know it's akin to what they meant at least...
| Mauricio Cuellar chapter 9 . 1/28
Es bueno autorización