Reviews for Evolution
FantasyFangirl13 chapter 5 . 3/21/2017
Given this story is so old, I doubt you will go back to it but I wish you would finish it. It's so good!
Transformers' BABY chapter 5 . 11/6/2015
Please update story is awesome
STAILS565 chapter 5 . 1/26/2013
Cont. Please cont. I LOVE THIS PAIRING TO DEATH! :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) cont. Please I beg you. But I'll wait.
Fientje chapter 5 . 10/5/2011
Wow, thit is the best story of Jedediah and Octavius I ever read! D
CocoaDance chapter 5 . 1/2/2010
I don't care if this story's old, it needs to be continued!
bluecup94 chapter 5 . 11/6/2009
Woo Hoo! I'm Liking The Story So Far, I Like How You've Incorperated Your Plot Into The Actual Storyline, It's Really Cool.

I Hope There's More :)
LifeMattersDoesntIt chapter 5 . 9/19/2009
Cute! I love it ) I so want to read more!

chrono-contract chapter 5 . 9/16/2009
i love it!
DgShadowChocolate chapter 5 . 9/10/2009
heh, heh, once again the clever cuteness just comes pouring out in the best places. CHARGE!
DgShadowChocolate chapter 4 . 8/3/2009
Don't mind me, I'm just grinning like a little idiot over here. Man, your stories are just so entertaining! I love it!
DgShadowChocolate chapter 3 . 7/28/2009
I keep forgetting how clever you can be Star.

I was giggling like crazy! well done!
Cowgirl Of Egypt chapter 3 . 7/28/2009
Nice, me likey, I'm really enjoying this story
Cowgirl Of Egypt chapter 2 . 7/24/2009
Excellent. Me likey. this really made me giggle. Poor Jed. Octavius nicked his checker peices...hehe.
DgShadowChocolate chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
point to Octavius!

Ha! great job!
Cowgirl Of Egypt chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
"Octavious and Jedidiah looked at one another, each with narrowed eyes. Though they both had the exact same thought, it was quickly repressed. ‘He’s so cute…’"

I love this end line. there needs to be more Jed/Octavius love in the world.
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