Reviews for What Happens At Charlie's Wedding |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Reread here . I didnt realise how annoying Bella was before but Edward ? Forgot how funny he was , boy’s a trip ! |
![]() ![]() This story sucks, you should let people this story is not exb |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m still trying to figure out why she doesn’t just tell him her ‘it’s complicated’ relationship is with Carlisle. Her behavior COULD appear to be a way of stringing him along. Playing hard to get. If his kiss was ‘gentle,’ then he didn’t ‘shove’ his tongue in her mouth. She is playing coy. If she really doesn’t want to kiss him, then she should slap the shit out of him, and go stay at the hotel, herself. There are options beyond passive-aggressive, bullshit words. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am HORRIFIED that Alice genuinely thinks it wouldn’t be wrong for Bella to do ANYTHING with Edward after being with his FATHER! That is a soulless world view! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know how much more of this I can read. I found it as a recommendation and I thought it was a Bella and Edward story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It seems wrong having Carlisle. and Bella in that kind of position. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not gonna lie, I think your Alice is kind of annoying. She's too nosy and pushy for my taste. Way too up in Bella's bizz if you know what I mean. Also, she's not being very caring to Bella's feelings, even though she claims to be her best friend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! Thanks for sharing your writing talent with us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh this is too much (in a good way) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! Thank you for the satisfying HEA. Such a fun, light hearted ride! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Girl, First of all, this has been holding my attention for days. What a fun romp! I appreciate the steamy sex scenes so much in their plentiful ness! I really was pulling for Edward to find out he was adopted and then have a three way with his not-dad but I may be filthy minority on that one lol also I love to picture Carlisle as a sexy bachelor. You paint a fun vision! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The flashbacks in this chapter.. *happy sigh* they were so, so good. I absolutely loved this beautiful story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, what a hot, fun ride! I didn't want to stop reading! Every spare second I could, I had my phone out, and I was scrolling. Carlisle and Bella are sooooo hot! And the layer of snarky Edward was perfect! I love all the different combinations of the canon characters. Esme and Charlie make sooooo much sense! And I adored all your author notes! As someone who loves to write…I so understand how the characters can bug you till you do what they want lol. I really enjoyed the POV chapter with Edward. It really helped me to fully understand his journey and what he felt. I really enjoyed this story. Only one silly issue I had was how fast Carlisle and Bella jumped into bed at the end after months of not talking and everything. I would have liked them just kissing maybe and then the next morning something happening. That sex scene was STILL HOT! lol Still very hot lol. Thank you so much for taking the time to write this and letting us enjoy reading it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for this great story, I really enjoy it. Take care |
![]() ![]() ![]() I never knew I was a Bella Carlisle fan until this story |