Reviews for What Happens At Charlie's Wedding |
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![]() ![]() ![]() omg great story love it! plz keep it cumin update soon! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() lolz, different but i like it, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter. please update soon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() very hot. not usually into bella without edward but i think i really like this carlisle |
![]() ![]() ![]() love that the hot doctor starts with a little action under the table with charlie there! definitely continuing |
![]() ![]() ![]() nothing wrong with a little carlisle action, i think i like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sharp, quick-witted and so HOT! I love your writing style. It's so easy to read and keeps you wanting more. The banter between Bella and Carlisle is fun and real and addictive, you can feel the age difference between the two in the manner in which they speak - teriffic. I can't wait to see what happens and how Edward fits into their dynamics. |
![]() ![]() omg plz update soon im dyen here lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! WOW i couldnt read fast enough... that was somethin else. great stuff. cant wait for the next installments.x |
![]() ![]() ![]() DAMN THIS IS A GREAT STORY..I REALLY CAN'T WAIT FOR U TO UPDATE! I HOPE U DON'T MIND ME MAKING A SUGGESTION..I THINK FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER THE PERSON WHO WALKED IN SHOULD BE ALICE. BUT HEY IT'S YOUR STORY...WELL HOPE U UPDATE SOON |
![]() ![]() ![]() Carlisle and Bella are HOT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh! I like the idea of this story. I hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() wow this sure starts out interesting *smile* and its really well written, plus the plot it something entirely new keep up the good work |