|Reviews for DVMR: The Outtakes|
| ded1 chapter 13 . 10/2/2013
So when are we going to hear about this conversation? Love your writing.
| Kathie - katmom chapter 13 . 9/28/2013
Hey, sweets. I just reread all of DESS and this. Would love to see more. I do understand not writing fic, too, as I have my own unfinished Fics. Maybe an outline of what would have happened? I could like that, too...maybe? Pretty please?
| cela chapter 8 . 3/24/2013
i would NEVER have had that converation with my mother. i never had that conversation with any of my friends except for sandy. we talked about everthing men. i tnink it had a lot to do with fact that we both had very unsatisfactory relationships with our boyfriends. eventually she married a great guy she met at parents-without-partners and moved to houston texas. i fianally married again at age forty and have now been marrried twenty-two years. he's not edward cullen , but REALLY, who is?
| Haleyr0918 chapter 13 . 12/27/2012
Love! Need more! Lol
| kezcullen chapter 5 . 7/14/2012
just read these to this point, and what a classic little group they are. in some ways more enjoyable than the actual chapter- senora goff was outstanding, poor woman.
| missylb chapter 13 . 5/11/2012
I really do love this and I can't wait for more x
| jane210 chapter 13 . 5/7/2012
Glad you did an update. You say you don't like ti write BPOV but you did a good job, keep up the good work.
| Passion82 chapter 13 . 3/2/2012
Love this outtake chapter...so glad you updated. Will you be updating The Day the Earth Stood Still main story soon?
| k1942 chapter 13 . 2/27/2012
I always like the interplay of Bella and Edward's minds. I liked, too, that Bella admitted why she had her doubts about Tanya and Charlie. Don't blame her too much , it would be weird to be in her shoes. What the hell, I just like this whole story, outtakes and all!
| BloodRedNight chapter 13 . 2/25/2012
Thank the Lord you are back it's been a long year waiting for updates and I am thrilled to see this. Wonderful addition I am looking forwadr to the conversation with Charlie I love the him and Tanya twist. Thanks again seeing this really turned my week around I can't wait for the next one
| TessLouise chapter 13 . 2/25/2012
So glad to see you! Great outtake...now I've got to go fry bacon. :)
| Kimmie43 chapter 13 . 2/24/2012
Thank you for posting this. Oh, how I do miss this story.
I can totally understand where Bella is coming from. I would feel the same way especially about Tanya.
Bella and Charlie defintely need to talk and also, I think bella might be preggers, but if she is, the cravings would be too soon; although the babies are half vamp.
Please update the story soon...:)
| Anne B chapter 13 . 2/23/2012
Sare! I tried to login in, but I now have to reset everything. It's been so long that I've changed email addresses and can't access anything. Boo. Anyway, lovely job as always. I'm kind of thrilled to see the BPOV, not because I've really missed it, but because I think not everyone really sees why this one thing broke Bella's cool. It makes perfect sense to me, and I think you portrayed it beautifully. I mean when you think about it, she's accepted a metric ton of weirdness with almost no ruffled feathers. And to have something happen that she not only can't control or influence but also is only indirectly about her (she IS still a teenager, however mature)... It's no wonder she's having a rough go. Poor kid. I'd be pretty irked myself. Not to mention the squick factor of your dad with the original succubus. Ew. All this to say that I loved it. And I kinda really sorta fervently hope another chapter of DESS is coming before a whole year has passed. (Pack yourself a bag, I'm sending you on a guilt trip!) Love you!
| LuluMoon chapter 4 . 2/20/2012
This chapter is beautifully put together - it really enhances the chapter where Edward and Bella decide to confess everything that concerns their relationship. Understanding Charlie's perspective makes the fact he takes it so well not just plausible but in fact, the only thing that could happen - a fathers love for his daughter is so delicately expressed here, especially in the last moment, his telling how he could never bear to lose Bella again.
Although Charlie never features that significantly in Bella's life or choices - either in this fanfiction of Meyer's original - this chapter shows how significant she is in his, and as it should be, because she is his only daughter.
In other words, I think you wrote this beautifully and I love this outtake.
| BlueDiamondRing chapter 13 . 2/18/2012
It was good to read something from this story. Can't to read their conversation with Charlie. Hope this means you will get back into writing this story again. Thanks.