Reviews for the unexpected
Mach the Cynic chapter 2 . 12/18/2013
I take back the undeserved praise that I have given after discovering that this story was plagiarized.

mmaclover, please take this down.
AnimeGirl 144 chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
This chapter, and the second chapter, take directly from CalmDuringtheHale over on Twilight School (her title was Baby Unknown)( twilightschool. niceboard t2710-baby-unknown-pg13). All you did was break it into two chapters, change names, and bold and underline the text (even though chapter 3 remains unbolded or underlined)
Mach the Cynic chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Now THIS is a well-written and original story. Please focus on this one.
greenlight.01 chapter 3 . 9/4/2009
reall good story! please carry on!