Reviews for Forgotten One
Cloud Bearer chapter 1 . 1/15/2016
This is so sad on so many levelsBu beautiful
Angelic Fluffle chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
How sad. Now I kinda want to see him get taken to the Soul Society.
Moonstarslight chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Nice, it is rather real. I can see this happening.
person chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
oh my...


just wow...

I'm stunned

this is amazing
FireFistAce111 chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
-cries- s-s-sooooo good! -cries more-
Sweet Minaa chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Very beautifully-written. It actually almost moved me to tears, especially at the end.
Just Awesome Like That chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
I think I might cry...
OliverLover chapter 1 . 12/21/2010

I...might...cry. :'(


Very nicely written, by the way. XDD

-oLiVeR oVeR & oUt
A Midsummer Night's Dream chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
...but she didn't.
LegitimateLostGirl chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Breath-taking. That was incredible. You are incredible.

I don't know what else I can say. Wow.

You Amaze me,


Skarla chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
*sniffs* *huggles Toshiro*

I think you really captured the way little kids feel about their parents in this fic. I just finished watching Aishiteru ze Baby, which also has a general abandonment theme... too much anxt! *cries* yet somehow I am still reading...
Lady Queria chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
dude 0_0
Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
Ouch... poor Toshiro...
Ryuuk96 chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
i'm crying, really i am. thats just so...sad, for lack of a better word.
Tomoshibi-Chan chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
wow...that was beautiful. It gave me chills up and down my spine. And the end? Wow, powerful. I cant breathe and i woke up the house (and almost got my computer taken awa) cause i was crying really hard. T.T

lol Ironicly, I was listening to this one song on my ipod while reading and it made me cry more cause the words like matched it perfect. grr

The lyrics were:

"Lost and insecure, you found me, you found me, lying on the floor, where were you? where were you?"

(the songs You Found Me by The Fray)

Gah, i have a conjested nose now! Ahh but so amazing .

Thats really well done. Wow...just Wow.
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