|Reviews for Forgotten One|
| Rize Shirosaki chapter 1 . 1/15
This is so sad on so many levelsBu beautiful
| Angelic Fluffle chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
How sad. Now I kinda want to see him get taken to the Soul Society.
| Moonstarslight chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Nice, it is rather real. I can see this happening.
| person chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
this is amazing
| FireFistAce111 chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
-cries- s-s-sooooo good! -cries more-
| Sweet Minaa chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Very beautifully-written. It actually almost moved me to tears, especially at the end.
| Just Awesome Like That chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
I think I might cry...
| OliverLover chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
POOR TOSHIRO! D:
Very nicely written, by the way. XDD
-oLiVeR oVeR & oUt
| A Midsummer Night's Dream chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
...but she didn't.
| LegitimateLostGirl chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Breath-taking. That was incredible. You are incredible.
I don't know what else I can say. Wow. just..wow.
You Amaze me,
| Skarla chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
*sniffs* *huggles Toshiro*
I think you really captured the way little kids feel about their parents in this fic. I just finished watching Aishiteru ze Baby, which also has a general abandonment theme... too much anxt! *cries* yet somehow I am still reading...
| Lady Queria chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
| Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
Ouch... poor Toshiro...
| Ryuuk96 chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
i'm crying, really i am. thats just so...sad, for lack of a better word.
| Tomoshibi-Chan chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
wow...that was beautiful. It gave me chills up and down my spine. And the end? Wow, powerful. I cant breathe and i woke up the house (and almost got my computer taken awa) cause i was crying really hard. T.T
lol Ironicly, I was listening to this one song on my ipod while reading and it made me cry more cause the words like matched it perfect. grr
The lyrics were:
"Lost and insecure, you found me, you found me, lying on the floor, where were you? where were you?"
(the songs You Found Me by The Fray)
Gah, i have a conjested nose now! Ahh but so amazing .
Thats really well done. Wow...just Wow.