Reviews for The Raven's Blade
field innocence chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
That was sweet and sad. The sorrow in this story was touching and angst. The narrator was good. Love it it _ This is going as my favorite.
Sindel chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
Hm, though interesting, a skim through Dante's Inferno would've probably helped you better with this story. For instance, adultery can only be committed if the two were actually married to another people. The line "They both lost their virginities to each other, but out of marriage" implies that they were married to each other and had the martial sex. Perhaps the sin you were going for is lust but hardly a crime in Hell.

Also, there's no any implication that Cassandra murdered anyone. More or less, it sounds like she did anything outside a relationship. Now, the actual sin you might've been looking for was "Violence Against Others", Circle Six, but you hardly made her seem like a bad guy.

Otherwise, keep trying.