|Reviews for Buffeted|
| Yazzy6 chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
I've read a few of your stories and I've liked every single one. Why don't you ever write more then just one chapter though?
I really enjoy reading your writing and think that you could make an entire story that is amazing. Give it some thought?
| La Kill chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
| Lazielow chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Good job !
You should continue this.
| 454513467 chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
As someone once said to me, oneshots always seem to end when the fun is about to begin. I couldn't agree more with them. I'm a little disappointed that it was so short, but I really appreciated your writing skill, and the ease with which you wield your words. I also really like the tone you employed while writing this, it made it all the more fun and playful.
Hope to see more stories from you,
| blackindiaink chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Aww, leave me wondering what that date is going to be like. Nice little ditty.
| swanqueen chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
despite the urge to read more of this, i must say that was a perfect ending. actually, my favorite kind, that makes you wonder ) besides the ending, i also liked the whole concept of your story, very lovely! thanks for sharing.
by the way, i feel like lying in my driveway now. which is not a good idea considering i live in a building heheh
| xXxSourdoughxXx chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
aw, come on, keep it going...
| The Wandering Muse chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
| xXxZellyxXx chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
you should continue to due the last line
"Its a date"
this doesn't seem to be a one-shot, it can be more, that's if you want it to be.
it was good, ciao
| nickolefox chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Great start! I like how you're portraying Bella's character.
can't wait for more
| Kai-chan14 chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Alice is very...forward...with Bella, huh? :) lol I guess its to be expected. Nice chapter, and I can't wait for the next. :D
| Jocelyn Torrent chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
"It's a date"
Translation: Second chapter
:P It's so real, B. Very good. And, despite my begging, you're just going to leave this as a oneshot :)
| Knight of Midnight chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
For some reason the idea of Bella just laying there in the middle of her driveway staring at the sky seems to me to be very normal. As if she did it all the time. But then again I bet she does spend a lot of time just staring at the sky because of the numerous times she falls flat on her back.
I liked the way that Alice appearing didn't seem strange to Bella, she was just embarrassed about it. It was sweet the way that she lay down next to her before saying anything.
Anyways, great writing and I can't wait for more.