|Reviews for Lost Voice, Nothing Important|
| No Name chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
I'm 12 years old right now -
And for some reason I've been looking up alot of things I watched when I was little -
And this is One of'em -
And I think Your fic was absolutly understandable! xD
| AsianAmericanGirl chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
Well, that story was quite...disturbing, no offense. And um, it was quite understandable, however, there are some parts of your story that I didn't understand much, I had to sit and analyze before I understood it. Like when the part Newt said "Sophie take away my voice." It should be: "Sophie took my voice away" (NOTE: past tense)
Oh and the part when Cory said "things what no involve to speak" it should be "things that does not involve speaking"
But anyways, not bad for a Brazilian writer. :)) Good job and continue writing more Cory in the House fanfics.