Reviews for A fearful day
twilightonedirection chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
awww this was so sweet! I love all of your stories! chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Heya! So I actually am in love with this story :D I've read through it a bunch of times, so I don't know why this is the first time I'm reviewing. It's definitely a favorite of mine though, I love reading it. The chemistry that you create between Edward and Bella is spot on, and neither of them are OOC. You've even got Edward's language down pat, which is really hard to do. I felt like I was actually there with them while they were having this conversation. Great job, and great one-shot. Thanks for writing this!

- Lexi
shortevilpixie chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
This is really good, I found nothing wrong with the grammar and you stayed very true to the books.

Something I think you could improve on is your endings, I think they should be more detailed an interesting. But the rest is great!

Short evil pixxxx
RedHann chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
I love Bella, she is my favorite character! I feel so bad for her! My eyes started watering as I read this. I love this story! This is the third story I have read by you and I have loved every one. You are deffinetly going on my Favorite Authors List!

capitaine-awesome chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
MoonlessnightXx chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
Oh my god this was so sweet, really cute.

Some people would see Bella as whiny during this, but she has had so much strength the whole time Edward was gone, not to kill herself. And now that he's back and she forgave him, she says she can't be with Jacob any more. I feel horrible for her, but at least she has an Edward to make it better.

I want an Edward. :_(

KC101 chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
i love it. so sweet lol
angelfishlex chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
That was a lovely one-shot :) I love how Edward is always there to comfort and protect Bella. Its so romantic *sighs*