|Reviews for Equilibrium|
| awesome optimus chapter 2 . 9/21/2013
That was very good! I was hoping that you could have made more of an optimus prime mpreg with a cute tiny sparkling next time.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
Ah, mpreg… forever making me squirm and squee.
| Chibi Tenshi Sama chapter 8 . 4/29/2013
I'm bamboozled. How on Earth did that manage to incredibly sexy? Why on Earth was the entire second half of this chapter the hottest thing I've read in, like, a week?
I'll never be able to watch the Transformers movies in the same way again...
Keep up the good work!
| Phoenix51 chapter 13 . 4/10/2013
I have read all of your story's at least 10 times, and each time I finish them I come to the same realization...you are the grandest Transformers fan-fiction writer EVER!
Thank you sooo much for sharing the wonderful tale with us!
| MajesticallyAwkward chapter 13 . 2/12/2013
For what was such a good concept for a story I found myself disappointed. Perhaps it's just not to my taste, I don't know, but I found your characters somewhat flat and uninteresting. There were a few minor errors but it was nothing a good beta can't fix. But since this was written a while ago I'm going to assume your writing skill has improved and solider on and read the sequel you wrote.
I hope my criticism doesn't offend you and you continue to write more.
| Qwertzu824 chapter 13 . 2/7/2013
Nice story, thanks for sharing
| Girl Supersonicboy chapter 13 . 1/3/2013
I really like this story. Good work. :-)
| simplegay me chapter 13 . 12/30/2012
WHOAH! I love It :) Amazing work and Chapter 8 was amazing :) I'm so reading the sequel :D
| keeperofcoldtoes chapter 13 . 10/24/2012
My ovaries! Now I have the urge to hug a baby.
| smileintothechaos chapter 13 . 9/27/2012
wow! this was so well written, I enjoyed it immensely! c:
| KiribanNagnus089 chapter 3 . 8/13/2012
BWAHAHAHAHA SAM YOU IDIOT! Starscream's the sire? Logical maybe from your point if view, but for us readers who know the truth (oh I sound so ominous! teehee) it's just ridiculously funny.
| KiribanMagnus089 chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
"No, but you're a lot denser."
Was that a sneaky insult, Ratchet my boy? *grin*
| SlytherinSoul14 chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
| Sunstreaker's Girl chapter 13 . 5/31/2012
I really enjoyed this fic. You did a great job with the storyline. I'm really excited to get started reading Provenance now!
| lisa.demonic.angel chapter 13 . 1/18/2012
the first thing i did wen i read 'sequel' was scream YAY . . .loved the story!