Just beautiful.️️️️️

It was amazing, I loved it. Thank you ️️️️️️

her maid is called mary and the dude is joseph lol

That was difficult to read esp as I figure ure going to have the relationship developing but the warning was there, but rape is like to me the worse crime (except sex with a minor) in the world at least if ure murdered it ends with death for rape the torture never truly ends the act may end but the repercussions are unbearable which is y sadly a lot of rape victims take their own lives I personally could never forgive that. U mentioned fountainhead I’ve never read the book but hate it with a passion because of dirty dancing I love that film an hate Robbie an what he says about that book so I had a feeling this story might not be for me. Having said all tha TALENTED WRITER

Really enjoyed this story! Definitely wild, but a delicate issue handled beautifully and so realistically! Human nature is something else. Anxious to read more from you! Happy writing!:)

Good story. Thanks!
:)

wow thats all i can say i certainly wouldnt respond to my rapist this way NO ONE WOULD this is ridiculous why hasnt she sneaked to the kitchen obtained a knife an ended the torment

how on earth could bella feel anything other than contempt and hatred for edward i dont know how u r going to turn this around if bella ever forgives the rapist she becomes an enabler in her position i wouldnt survive ive been abused so was a bit dubious reading the chapter but it was 30 years ago and i think u showed edwards evil character well

Lots of people here condemning you for the rape scene. Obviously the author isn’t trying to say rape leading to relationships is good, Edward himself goes to “kill himselfessentially) because of his guilt over it. He goes into that in his letter.

The scene was well written actually, showing that not all rape is violent and bloody, and it has the same mental effect as if it had been. Bella’s shame over the situation is made abundantly clear and no one beats around the bush that it was f’ed up.

My interpretation is that Bella and Edward had an intertwined destiny and although the beginning was monstrous they were unable to deny the connection they had. Seriously, the author really wrote the story well and I wish she had written more!

i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i love Bella & Edward together & I’m happy that Bella & Edward are having a baby girl

You are a wonderful writer..
I cants tell you what a pleasure it was to read the final chapter
Thank you for writing so beautifully ️️

I wanted to read this, but the line spacings are really weird on the app (assuming this isn’t the case if I read it on the website). It makes it really hard to read as sentences are split weirdly across multiple lines for some reason… I’ll try read it on the website at some point

Thanks for your story, really enjoyed EVERY moment. First story read I finished grad school.

This chapter was weird. I liked it though.

Wtf