|Reviews for Public Enemy|
| KeeWit chapter 3 . 7/2/2010
And again. THanks for writing.
| KeeWit chapter 2 . 7/2/2010
Another chance to review and up your count ...
| KeeWit chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
Great ending. Very unexpected.
| ivy.and.gold chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
| TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
hehe! i love reading your one-shots! lol! D this one sounds interesting.. and i like Edward in the Public Enemy times.. lol! hahaha... i was wondering how she played into this... Awesome.. i already love it! Aww.. they did have children! that was so precious! i wish there was more though! lol! but i always do.. lol! i loved it so much was an incredible writing!... i do wish it would continue! ok so anyways im off.. until i get the urge to read another one of your stories! lol! which might be soon.. haha! :D
| MezitaCo chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
Completally awesome :D
| Hyacinth85 chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
Great! You really made me believe for a moment you had killed them :O - but good you didn't !
| 4kitty101 chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
| insanefangirl94 chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
please turn this into a long story not just a one-shot i love it and i think bank robbing edward is so hot and i love the whole edward/john dillinger persona i begging please turn this into more than a one-shot
| DiscoLemonadeDiva chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
This is totally awesome. I just watched the movie, and I must say that I love this ending so much more! :D
| bookworm19065 chapter 3 . 12/2/2009
Nice! This is really good :D
| TwiTragic13 chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
i read your story ages ago and i just keep coming back to it
its brilliant have you ever considered making it a full story
keep me updated
| eva wilson chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
True but volvos weren't sold in the US til the 50's. In fact the very first volvo ever to appear in the US didn't make that appearance til the 40's for an exhibition. see the link below
It would be odd for most people to have a foreign car in the 30's as the expense of bringing them overseas wouldn't have made them practical for sale in the us. So for a gangster to have a car that frankly stood out so clearly would be doubly unusual. It would attract a great deal of attention and signal to law enforcement his location.
I only want to make this point because it's such a big detail in your descriptions of Edward's actions and could have been researched.
| edcllen chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
this was so sweet! i loved it
| glo4twilight chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
that was really cool! totally enjoyed it even tho i thought she was going to die but thankfully it was a definite HEA cos they got to have their children! nice work! you so rock at these one shot stories!