|Reviews for Public Enemy|
| glo4twilight chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
that was really cool! totally enjoyed it even tho i thought she was going to die but thankfully it was a definite HEA cos they got to have their children! nice work! you so rock at these one shot stories!
| kmfroggi chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
this was really good, i very much enjoyed it!
| mischiefmaker1 chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
That was freakin' awesome, bb! Loved it!
| 7teen.4ever chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
what did edward do? this is good.
| frankfart101 chapter 3 . 8/20/2009
I dunnt get it . why was he smiling when he ripped the letter?
| Cullen-Chick chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
Lol the ending made me laugh..
Was Charlie in on this too, well i guess he had to be cause of Bella..
| Olliex chapter 3 . 8/6/2009
Wow i like it!
| kneon chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Great story I hope you plan to extend it for us. It would make a great story.
| Agathons Fan chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
This was a really great fic, Im sorry I didnt read it before when voting was still open cause this was definately one of my favorites. I loved it; it had a little of everything - action/romance/suspence.
| Motoko The Red Queen chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
OMFG! I LOVED THE STORY! Was amazing, incredible, full af action and beautiful cars and had a happy ending! Pretty cool! You're a great writer! Congratulations!
| KatieCullen1.77245 chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
For a little while at the beginning I really thought Edward didn't know Bella. It was an interesting twist. I loved the end with Charlie's POV. It gave the one shot a nice ending.
| jackiehydelover chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
Loved it! Wouldn't mind seeing this as a multi-chapter story if you're up for it! I think it would be a lot of fun :D
| Andrea chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
WOW. that was a really really really unexpected plot. you're the best writer EVER! i didn't expect bella to be in on the robbery, nor did i expect charlie to know about edward and bella! i love this story!
| mfrancesj chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
I love this story!
| missingcolton chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
Loved your story! It was incredible. And loved your pictures of the boys cars.