Reviews for The First One |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do love Spock and Nyota! She really understand Spock with his dry humor. Some say he has no emotions but Spock's emotions run deep! Good story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a great introduction to their relationship. Nicely written, hope to read more like this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I was hanging on every word. You made their dialouge seem so natural, wow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() absolutely delightful. Spock's Vulcan-style, unwitting "flirting" and Uhura's confusion in response is just perfect! And the ending is absolutely priceless! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Forever laughing at Spock likening a relationship to a science experiment... super cute story. |
![]() ![]() Oh, this story was too adorable for words! Wish there was more ! Beachgirl25 |
![]() ![]() Loved this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too cute. I love spocks very logical way of askin uhura to "go steady". Cute and clever. |
![]() ![]() omg that was the most amazing thing i've ever read in the history of all readable things! Please tell me there's a sequel... :/ If I could see a clip of this interaction, i'd give the director gold or bags of money, or a million fan letters written by yours truly. "Ms. Uhura," Spock began slowly, his face still frowning slightly. "I do believe that I am having some sort of a reaction to you." Just that one quote had me squeeling with delight. I could imagine him saying it so calmly and Uhura wondering what in the world is happening. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uhura's eyebrow lifted suddenly and her eyes lanced downward to the lower half of his body, which was covered by the table. She glanced back up at him. "I beg your pardon?" FUNNIEST DAMN THING ON FANFICTION! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice, good sticking to the characters :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting way to have Spock discover his attraction to Uhura. But perfectly logical and his response/the discussion following was great. Good job capturing the characters' personalities. And just finished The Hesitant One. :) I hope you continue and make this a series! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have just read all of your TOS stories and I truly hope you will write more soon. I am very anxious to see how Spock and Nyota's relationship will develop. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it. Absolutely adorable |