|Reviews for The First One|
| Courage Flavored chapter 1 . 4/30
Great story! I was hanging on every word. You made their dialouge seem so natural, wow.
| purpleann chapter 1 . 7/29/2016
absolutely delightful. Spock's Vulcan-style, unwitting "flirting" and Uhura's confusion in response is just perfect! And the ending is absolutely priceless! :)
| Dr. Holland chapter 1 . 4/26/2016
Forever laughing at Spock likening a relationship to a science experiment... super cute story.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
Oh, this story was too adorable for words! Wish there was more !
| Carol Watts chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
Loved this story!
| TroysMom09 chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Too cute. I love spocks very logical way of askin uhura to "go steady". Cute and clever.
| kendrat199gmail chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
omg that was the most amazing thing i've ever read in the history of all readable things! Please tell me there's a sequel... :/ If I could see a clip of this interaction, i'd give the director gold or bags of money, or a million fan letters written by yours truly. "Ms. Uhura," Spock began slowly, his face still frowning slightly. "I do believe that I am having some sort of a reaction to you." Just that one quote had me squeeling with delight. I could imagine him saying it so calmly and Uhura wondering what in the world is happening. Thank you!
| ViBookWorm chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Uhura's eyebrow lifted suddenly and her eyes lanced downward to the lower half of his body, which was covered by the table. She glanced back up at him. "I beg your pardon?"
FUNNIEST DAMN THING ON FANFICTION!
| Anti-Carly chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
very nice, good sticking to the characters :D
| StormingtheGambit chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Very interesting way to have Spock discover his attraction to Uhura. But perfectly logical and his response/the discussion following was great. Good job capturing the characters' personalities. And just finished The Hesitant One. :) I hope you continue and make this a series! :)
| QTFics chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
I have just read all of your TOS stories and I truly hope you will write more soon. I am very anxious to see how Spock and Nyota's relationship will develop.
| Woodrow Graham Kenobi-Rimmer chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
I love it. Absolutely adorable
| LusciousNesha chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
This is a really nice story. I'm sitting here reading different ones and I was surprised that there were not more reviews on your works. It's probably because of the K rating. Technically, it is K material, but I think that it'd appeal to T audiences, and more people would probably read them. maybe, I dunno for sure. Thanks for sharing.
| E. E. Lopez chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Very Cute! I loved the dialogue between them. Very well written.
| gppr chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
I am loving your portrayals of Spock and Uhura. The things he said were so much in character! I can't wait to see where this experiment leads them.