Reviews for Advice
congratsyou'vegrownasoul chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Oh dear. What a lovely little snapshot into what must have been a trying time for both of them.
spotsclaw3000 chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
Cute. I like it. I think you could proofread it a little more.
sateda chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
little short, but hey it was great cant wait for more
Admiral StarNight chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Nice story. Ferncloud/dustpelt forever! Its reslly nice to see you writing a warriors story too
eaglefeather15 chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Well, it was short... But pretty good. I suggest you should've put a little more detail into the chapter. But, hey, it was good!