Reviews for Existence
KagomeGirl021 chapter 5 . 6/10/2013
so when will this be updated? You say this is being rewritten so when will the rewrite be up? its been 3 years since the last update and your author's note. I really wish to see what will happen next.
CalcBoy91 chapter 5 . 8/29/2012
You're doing a rewrite...but it's been two years...WHAT'S UP WITH THAT?
New Universe Returns chapter 5 . 5/17/2012
I hope you are not abandonning this. It's a great story.
RaisingHeartSetUp chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Good story. What's going to happen when Naruto meets Yugito?
SarbearOkami chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
O_O narutos thoughts is The seal are pretty deep.
Josher chapter 5 . 3/2/2011
You're right, does need work. Mainly in the interactions and bonding occurred too swiftly and with so many infodumps.
FTFCHRIS chapter 5 . 12/10/2010
Great. This thing needed a major rewrite. Nice idea, horrible follow through.
Black Ace 0 chapter 5 . 11/4/2010
What is the rewrite called?
ADD Kyuubi Naruto chapter 5 . 8/18/2010
Nice, it's good to know you're rewriting. Some characterization would be good for the fic
Phnxfyr1 chapter 5 . 8/15/2010
Are you just retyping the chapters or are you putting them in a new story altogether?
you know me chapter 5 . 8/10/2010
you do relize that i now hate you for the a/n in you last chapter now right? nah im kidding just update again when you can though sooner would be nice its not often that a good crossover fic is made with what i would call a slightly minor xover-type like S/M and naruto so keep it up.
Matthew Blackheart chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
cool
The Gallant Jiraiya-Sama chapter 5 . 7/21/2010
Look it seems like u haven't updated this story in a while so would you mind? I mean it is a good story so plz consider it
Star Dust of Ancient Novae chapter 5 . 7/7/2010
cool
Guest chapter 5 . 6/28/2010
FUCK YOU?

Are you airheaded or something?

Rewriting a perfectly good story!
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