Reviews for Feud
abubi-chan chapter 3 . 7/26/2009
the last line just complemented tokiya's interest for fuuko. i absolutely could not wait for the next chapter. i'm guessing that there would be more tofuu interactions, yes? i'm starting to get the whole feel and theme of the story, and you're doing quite a good job in executing it. update soon! ;)
TuckingFypo chapter 3 . 7/26/2009
KYAA! You update so fast! :D


The ToFuu interaction was pretty cool. :D But what's with Tokiya's "tail"? I mean...does it turn to legs? How? XD Just curious.

Everyone wants to know what happens next so update soon, okay? _
loujane14 chapter 3 . 7/26/2009

not that tokiya would try anything, but fuuko's going to bite his head off once he do anything funny around her. wonder how fuuko would entertain him after her cheeky remark before.

did i blow up your real plan concerning kenji and/or mifuyu? but yeah why not? they could set an example of forbidden love for tokiya and fuuko.

waiting for the next chapter...
Eirist chapter 3 . 7/26/2009
the archive is really slump. i hate to think people are losing interest in this archive... i guess owe you some reviews. hehe! i wasn't able to leave some for the first two chapters. always loved your AU fics. you're one heck of an AU author (and in my opinion, AU fics are kinda had to write).

i nearly choked on this line (i was drinking something while reading your fic), “Since you’ve done enough sightseeing over my front, why don’t you let me turn around so you can see all of my behind as well?”. and yeah, i really quoted it because i like it. haha! and tokiya's ooc-ness can be forgiven. i mean, this fic is AU after all right? hehe! as usual i can't wait for the tofuu interactions. update soon ne? and you passed that hell-of-a-board-exam right? congratulations! i hope you don't mind me congratulating you here. :D
malo chapter 2 . 7/25/2009
hey! its been a long time...

you've got a new fic! seems interesting...can't wait for the update!:D
loujane14 chapter 2 . 7/24/2009
is that tokiya? i hope so..i can barely wait to see their first interaction.

i bet 10 brownie points that mifuyu's husband is kenji, fuuko's brother.

where is yanagi by the way?
satomika chapter 2 . 7/22/2009

i like the idea of rubies and gold coins used for barter exchange...


i hope you update soon!
abubi-chan chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
i liked how you flowed well from describing one character to the next. you're making great progress with your writing technique and you have started to establish your style, so keep it up. i suggest you read good fictions that lie on the same genre as this and gather ideas from there! from how you're going now with this story, there's really nothing to complain about except you left us hanging! i'm hoping that tokiya makes an appearance in the next chapter. i'm excited on how their first impressions of the other would be. :) ciao!
TuckingFypo chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
Yay! You updated! You totally made my day! :D I like this chappie, but I hope that there will be ToFuu interaction soon. _
Ushinaware Ta Kaze chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
Oh me so like it!

BTW is Mifyu's husband by any chance Fuu-chan's bro? *grins*

okay okay maybe not, just have a hunch. hehe can't wait to find out who that person is! XD Me so excited!

N yeah the blog is completely dormant -_-'

Anyway update soon!
abubi-chan chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
i'm so happy to read another story from you! you played with the whole theme very well. i'm impressed on how well you transition from modern AU to fantasy AU. this is a fresh change of genre for the FOR community, and i would want nothing more but to read more of this story. you have a great plot going. :) ciao!
TuckingFypo chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Wow! This is good so far! Very fantastic! As expected of Khryzle-chan! :D

Hmm...and is "Shen Kurenai" Ms. Shiela? (Shen_hui) XD

And another question...the characters. Why did it said that the main characters were "Tokiya M. and Gaou"? WHY GAOU? XD I'm just curious...

I hope you update soon! :D
Ushinaware Ta Kaze chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Awesome!(as always!) I so totally love this chapter and I know that I'm gonna love this story too! Update soon!
loony od chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
shenny doesn't wanna hear her role, wahahah!


me likey!
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