Reviews for Knowers & Demons I: Set the Captives Free
Lunary chapter 8 . 1/27/2016
Good Story.

VG LittleBear chapter 8 . 9/8/2015
Hi, I liked that very much. Tim has such mysterious ancestors! Tony forever provides the brawn, but it's his protectiveness that makes him into who he is. Thanks and cheers!
tanithlipsky chapter 8 . 4/24/2015
Toni M H chapter 8 . 6/9/2014
Awesome story very creative. Amazing it came from a nightmare. I like the fact that you took something that scared you and turned it into something people could enjoy. (not that I like you being scared!) 0_0
scousemuz1k chapter 8 . 11/11/2013
Finally managed to get to read story one... really enjoyed it. I hear the other night there was an ep doing yet more damage to Tony and Tim as friends - when are they going to give up? I love them as better than brothers. On to the next one...
Midnight1906 chapter 8 . 9/4/2013
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Gottahavemyncis chapter 8 . 9/22/2011
Whoa, super story! Ok, on to the next one and then to your new one. :D!
Dreamer22 chapter 8 . 3/26/2011
very, VERY strange story but I enjoyed it! well done
Lidil chapter 8 . 3/3/2011

Two of my favorite things.

NCIS and Fantasy.

I like it!

Good work.
Danielle chapter 8 . 9/24/2010
Oh my GOODNESS! That was crazy!

Boy oh boy! I would hate to be in that horror "movie"!

I'm glad for the Tony and Tim friendship!
alix33 chapter 8 . 9/22/2010
"I don't think I should be driving," Tim said suddenly when they reached his car. "I'm not sure I should be either. I feel like I'm walking on a waterbed." "Maybe...maybe I'll call a taxi." "Man,'re some sort of special race of human being and you're going to call a taxi?" Tim rolled his eyes. "I also used to take the bus, remember?" "Good point. Taxi it is." - Hehehe.
alix33 chapter 6 . 9/22/2010
"Then, she raised her other hand high above her head and said simply, "Come." - Why did she raise her free hand?

"If I choose to remember?" "You will leave and you will know, accepting the consequences of that knowing," - That means that the Proprietor will come after DiNozzo too, or I think that is what it means...
alix33 chapter 5 . 9/22/2010
"Then, after a few minutes, he noticed that there was no darkness, no space, no swirling cloud of evil. Just Tim, bleeding out on the floor. Just a big empty room...filled with green light?" - What in blazes does green light mean in the NCIS-verse, though? I only know it (green light) is seriously bad and evil whenever you encounter it in the Potterverse...
alix33 chapter 4 . 9/22/2010
"Can't you hear them, Tony? They're so loud." "Hear who?" "Them. Their voices!" Tim looked around, completely spooked. "They're all here! All of them!" "I don't hear anything." - OK, this is a bit like Harry in Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets (book or/and movie) being the only one who can hear the basilisk moving about in the school's plumbing because he (Harry) is the only parselmouth (speaker of snake language) in the school, except for the horcrux in Tom Riddle's diary.

NO! (Tim just shot himself)
alix33 chapter 2 . 9/22/2010
"he saw that he was being attacked by...Tim. Only this Tim had no kindness, no uncertainty in his face." - This Tim is a mental pic that is not forming.

"McGee, you want to explain to me why we've suddenly stepped into the mind of Stephen King?" "Not here. Not now. Not while there's still the other me running around." - OK, to me, that bit meant the explanation is long and complicated, far too long and too complicated to happen while they have a tattoo-hand-Tim still after them.

"We need to go through the door." "Back outside?" Tony asked hopefully. "No. Further in. We can't leave now that it's started." - I was also hoping to hear "back outside".
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