|Reviews for Katies Mind|
| archiveduser1836251 chapter 3 . 9/4/2010
Is this categorized in the right place?
| caramel729cucumber chapter 3 . 3/19/2010
Hmm, interesting. Looks exciting; I want to know what happens next. There are a few grammatical mistakes though (the title should be Katie's Mind, I think).
| Ab55556 chapter 3 . 9/7/2009
How...HOW do you manage to make it so short yet so good?
It's not fair, I am very jealous :P
The ending is very good, and the emotions she goes through are perfectly captured and written.
You could give Em a run for her money, and that is saying something!
Also love how its in the present, not a lot of people do that, but it gives the story a new angle to read from.
| Tiva4evaxxx chapter 3 . 8/30/2009
Again i hate you!
That was just wow!
You're so amazing.
It's so unfair :P
Loved the last line.
| OutCold chapter 3 . 8/30/2009
Your descriptive writing is on a whole other level. Your work always seems to flow together, I doubt you're ever stuck for the right word!
The ending of this chapter rocks, the strength it shows is fantastic. Katie's a really interesting character.
Please UD soon.
| OutCold chapter 2 . 8/8/2009
Wow, that's wonderful. I love the first couple of lines. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
| OutCold chapter 1 . 8/8/2009
I love the books, but this is possibly better written than them. It definitely carries on all the emotions in them. Off to read the next chapter.
| YouGottaSingAlong chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
1) Tiva4evax is a really bad advertisement post. To find this I had to search through her fav authors to fitted ".x", could you tell her that, I've already answered about 16 PMs this morning (and have about two dozen more chapters to review), and can't be bothered PMing her to say.
2) Maybe you wanted a review, not me moaning about Emily's advertising skills.
3) Review. I liked it. I can only vaguely remember the books, but it seemed well written and IC.
And the first paragraph was utterly brilliant.
| Ab55556 chapter 2 . 7/14/2009
please hurry up and write the next chapter!
when did you write this? the description is amazing and so unique. such as "scratched legs run quickly now"
i could never think up something like that!
where is she now? i really want to know!
just gets better with every chapter!
| Ab55556 chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
i didnt think it was going to get any better than last time. Because last time was at least GCSE standard creative writing, but this is indescribable!
im so glad you write now!
i havent read wind on fire. i probably couldnt now because it would seem like rubbish compared to this. The first two paragraphs are my favourite, immediately draws in the reader!
then it says: "This is Katie's life"
you may not realise it, but that is such a fantastic sentence. Immefiately, the reader wants to find out more about Katie. cant wait to go staright on and read the next chapter!
| Tiva4evaxxx chapter 2 . 7/14/2009
You're great, did you know that?
I liked the line "Platinum hair streamed behind her" all of that was amazing. I'm hoping Ali will be on later and i'll tell her you're here.
| Tiva4evaxxx chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Yeah, i'm amazing.
That was beautiful, breath taking. I really love it, the bit at the beginning was so effective, and then the way you just wrote, "This place is Katie's mind." was brilliant.
You have such an amazing writing style, i hate you!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Oh also the ending was great, "Andy smiled"