|Reviews for A Malodorous Dilemma|
| kokoronagomu chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
| J Luc Pitard chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
Short and sweet! (Or sour, depending on the wind.)
One note, the line "Totosai fell into the lake." gives this a bit of a kid's book feeling. It can be left at "Kersplash!" (which I loved.) I think the following line starting with "He sputtered..." is fine or you could elaborate there with him thrashing in the water to stand up or some such.
| Silent Scribe chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
An endearing turnaround. :D