|Reviews for Breaking the Surface|
| Yami's Sweetheart chapter 16 . 10/16/2013
| Mio12 chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
| Echo Hikari chapter 16 . 10/20/2012
*Cries* E-echo HOW COULD YOU MAKE ME READ THIS!
Echo: I liked it
It was good but... *Sniffs* SO SAD
Echo: Cry me a river
That's what I'm doing!
Echo: Oh... *Rolls her eyes* You get what I mean
O-oh... And great story *Sniffs again*
Echo: Yeah, what she said
| Echo Hikari chapter 3 . 10/20/2012
Echo: ...Still think Katy doesn't do this?
No I knew she does this. I don't judge.
Great story by the way!
| JudyTheMangaFreak chapter 16 . 10/10/2011
Well... I don't know how to put it, but your story is just... different I doubt that's the right word, but it's all I can think of now.
Yours is like a refreshment among other fics, at least to me. When I dwell so much in fics, either the Harlequin-style or angst type, I would happen to bump into your story and it would stand out the most after all those things
Great story! You're a great author! Keep up the good work!
| Bridgefall chapter 16 . 8/11/2010
Great story. One of the few real life stories that are able to hold themselves above the norm. That story bound me to itself. Really good written! Thanks for writing it
| deactivated82940 chapter 16 . 7/5/2010
I love the last chapter. And the limes; don’t know why but I liked the ‘not all limes, not all green’ lines a lot. And the title drop at the end was lovely, a wonderful ending to the whole thing.
I wish I had more to say, but most of it would be ramblings. I do like the story, I do. It’s, how shall I say, there are individual parts that I dislike with great intensity, but somehow I still like the story as a whole despite it. But those parts are still there, to be reread and hated all over again, making it un-enjoyable to reread. Which sounds REALLY horrible and mean and icky, only, I mean it as a compliment. So hopefully you take it as the compliment it is? Because this is a good story, enjoyable to read, and a bit thought provoking on top of it all.
| Classy Abigail chapter 16 . 5/15/2010
Wow. How did I rediscover this after all this time? I read your story when it was about halfway done, but I guess I somehow lost track of it. I'm pretty thrilled that I found it again.
Let me just say that this fic of yours is nothing short of amazing. It's so well-written! Everything is fluid and a joy to read. Really. Two thumbs up haha!
| GoldenFantasy528 chapter 16 . 3/3/2010
Man, I just happened to be scrolling through fanfics at 12 in the morning and this one came up... AND I LOVE IT!
I read the whole thing and it is so incredibly deep that I am speechless:o
The way you made your characters go through things that would happen in reality and how they expressed them (yugi) is just amazing..!
Anyways, I love your writing style, and keep up the awesome work!:)
(btw, this is the longest review I have ever written)
| Raina1 chapter 16 . 2/17/2010
Your work makes me cry. I get so many S.E. Hinton vibes off this fic and I LOVE her work, so you get extra points for that alone. Thank you so much for writing this. :)
| Ninjabelle chapter 16 . 12/18/2009
This story... I thought it was all pretty heavy, but very well written since your are truly a great writer. I really did love the last chapter the most... and I also thought that the 'All limes are green, not all green things are limes.' part was very... DEEP. I don't know how to explain but it seems to have such a big meaning to it. And then the end... 'No where. Just breaking the surface.' it gave me goosebumps!
So yeah. Great story especially the end!
| NaomieKeiko chapter 16 . 11/2/2009
:3 Yay Another day, another fic.. And it was amazing, I love your writing style it's just so tangible.. Very easy to get into, to imagine. You rewrite the characters to make them seem more human.. To have more flaws and make them more relateable, and the story was really great- it's had me thinking.
Thanks and much love
| PlentyOfFun chapter 16 . 10/6/2009
This was a great story :3 I love the way you wrote this :) I also love the way you made Yugi so OOC instead of the "Oh-so-innocent-super-special-awesome" Yugi we seem him as :P
| marie.antoniette chapter 16 . 9/29/2009
I really liked this chapter. I was reading this chapter while listening to "Mad World" by R.E.M. and it was kinda connected, the song and the music, I mean.
The story was great. I won't lie, some chapters were sad and 'different' from what I usually read, but overall it was good. Can't wait until your next story
| TIGGI1 chapter 16 . 9/29/2009
yay thanks so much !