|Reviews for The Last of Ra|
| CharmingStar chapter 3 . 9/9/2003
thats really good, i need more, continue
| Morgul Queen chapter 1 . 7/14/2002
cool story and all but...(not trying to sound pickey)
there are 20 rings of power(9317)
| Hesirll chapter 3 . 4/23/2002
Ok... I guess, it'd be better if you had longer chapters and proof read it though as some bits have to be interprited to make sence. Also try to start new paragraphs for speech.
| Cath chapter 2 . 4/13/2002
Realy cool! I love Sg1 And Harry potter!
| Nammie chapter 2 . 12/31/2001
What happens? I cant wait