Reviews for Strawberries
cid.neha chapter 1 . 6/13
Pretty entertaining;)
Refraction of Light chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
HAHAHAH. Love your story. How she ate it was really sensual though.
LeChick chapter 1 . 2/21/2014
This is simply excellent written.
inScense09 chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
Hahaha cute I would say.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
It was cute and sweet
SecretlySnowQueen chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Cute. Sorry about your week... yeah.
KrazyKat101 chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Haha! Aww... I love this! Too cute! I like how near the end Ash is in la-la land all watching Misty eating the strawberry in like, slow-motion and then all of the sudden:

"Ash, what the hell are you staring at?"

Hahahahahaha! You could've said if it was Misty or Brock who said that (probably Misty, but still), to clear up any confusion, but other than that... I LOVED IT!

Andrea chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Haha his hormones finally kicked in! I love it! XD Great story.
Daughter Of Poseiden chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Haha I like the last line
DemonessRaven chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Hello again!

Well, I said I wanted to read more of your stuff so here I am xD

Very good one! Poor Ash, adolescence always seems to hit him hard xD

Poor you, Marketing Fundamentals seems a pretty boring subject, thanks gods school is over!

Again, very funny one!

Demoness Raven
serenityselena chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
funny and cute _
Alpha Taco chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
I feel so sorry for ash! This is a great one-shot.
xxkoffeexx chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
Haha! Ash's hormones awake because of strawberries. That is so cute!
Prongs.xo chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
This was cute xD Short but sweet :)

I'm really starting to like you now.. Can't wait to read your other stories!
draco122 chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
It was a good story. The only bad thing was that i felt you could have given a little more. But other then that it was a great story.

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