This is going to be my 3rd time reading through this story

Ghost sexually assualts some random woman. Wtf, pervert tropes in anime are creepy as hell. This is creepy.

the fact kurotsuchi isnt the tsuchikages granddaughter irks the canon obsessed nutjob that i am. but its offset by how great this story is.

whats with the kiba hate?

Ngl, every chapter that goes by, naruto seems like a disrespectful piece of shit. Out of everyone in this 'group' naruto is the one that is getting the most out of it, by means of help and training so he can live. Where is the gratefulness, respect, consideration? After all ghost didn't have to help him or his 'precious' idiot people, he could have left them to die for their own mistakes. I just feel like ghost need to give the kid a serious beat down to make him realize he's not the top dog here and never will be.

Hinata is more weird than usual in this story. Naruto keeps getting on ghost ass about money, if it wasn't for ghost in the first place, naruto dumbass bitchass would be dead, lol.

This story, seems to be getting better every chapter!

It's funny, but I was surprised on how you kept Danzo in. Hell, if I made a Naruto Fanfic, I might need to think everything carefully to how I'll make things work. Especially if I ever do a Naruto x Fate Series in both ways, aka Naruto Summoning a Servant and Naruto being Summoned as a Servant and in which Holy Grail War.

All I could say is that, if I ever do a Naruto Fanfic, I'll use Kischur Zelretch Schweinorg to make the Changes and nothing else. He's in a too perfect of a Position to not use as the reason of said Changes. For example, Dropping a Certain Set of Uzumaki Clan Related Books into Naruto's Apartment, to see what would happen for the fun of it.

Anyways. I wonder if you'll make Haku to suddenly be a part of the NaruHina Relationship. Cause for some reason, I'm thinking of Shota-Naruto if you ever thought of giving him a Harem.

I have a Suggestion. Make the Sensei's and their Genin Team from the Chūnin Exam Finals, along with Hiruzen, Jiraiya, Tsunade, Shizune, Zabuza, and Haku to be with them. As well as Teen Naruto who just left Jiraiya's Grave and just passed out on Kakashi's back, and Adult Naruto who just got knocked out by Himawari Uzumaki in the day he's supposed to gain the Hat of being the 7th Hokage.

When I said Team, I do mean Team 7 with Kakashi, Team 8 with Kurenai, Team 9 with Gai, Team 10 with Asuma, Gaara's Team, and the Konohamaru Trio.

For fun, have Kishina Uzumaki and Minato Namikaze to also Appear, with Kushina loudly Scolding Hiruzen, Jiraiya, Tsunade, and Kakashi for their Stupidity and revealing that they've been in Naruto from the very beginning and have seen, heard, and felt Naruto's pain, with both of them being Angry that they don't have the time to make a more Proper Seal for them to freely talk with Naruto. Then Adult Naruto inform them that Kurama the Kyūbi isn't a Mere Beast, cause if he was, then the other Tailed Beast are incapable of Speech and ask them on what they would feel being sealed into a person and can't do anything but to watch their Skills and feel their Chakra to be drained, stating that if any of them was suddenly pushed into a Jail, they'll instantly go violent and try to find a way out, especially when there's nothing to do for what feels like eternity, as you watch your jailer's entire life, cringing and so on whenever you see them do something stupid or something you don't want to see.

Anyways. I Suggest, not demand, for you to make a React Fic of this Fanfic of yours.

Hell, you could even have your OP OC's to Physically go into the Screen and appear in it, and do what they're supposed to do. Including Ghost being seen walking Drunk and accidentally went into the Screen, not knowing what's happening and did what he need to do, and when he return, he suddenly saw everyone and start sweating at seeing the person, or group of people, aka the People he mentioned he doesn't want to see due to accidentally finding the world they've been looking for.

Your probably not going to see this, and its been over a decade since I read the hell out of this masterpiece. But I have to ask, are you the author of he who fights with monster's? The writing is very similar and the main character reminds me a lot of ghost. Im like 99% sure and if it's true that is awesome as hell.

Honestly my third time reading this... I think I have an explaination as to 'how' crypt is broken at this point... and Yes I vaguely remember the how/why hes screwed up being mentioned later. Either in this one of the sequel.

I really wanted to read the story, but Ghost and the overall dialogue is too obnoxious for my taste. This could be a good story, but it’s just not for me.

Gaara should have a link since he died when Shukaku got extracted. Not sure if that just isn't mentioned yet or was forgotten

I don't understand the logic behind Tobi having the other half of Kurama. So it's stated that he controlled kurama because he has half of him and had the somehow free half attack Konoha, but sarutobi says kurama was smaller when he saw Minato seal it in Naruto, meaning full kurama attacked Konoha. He can't just give and take away half of Kurama whenever he wants since he's a jinchuriki apparently, so the only explanation is that Tobi somehow hijacked the half of Kurama that was supposed to be sealed in Minato by the shinigami and left the other half to Naruto. That dosent make any sense either, this entire premise is confusing and full of holes honestly

so Lee's into the fairy OddParents? I've read this twice and I just saw it.