| Reviews for Yet again, with a little extra help |
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   heartbell chapter 11 . 7/19 one of the best authors ever |
| Flamarow chapter 26 . 7/18 Kakashi's response to Naruto being late was both unexpected and absolutely perfect! Good job! :D |
| xenosaiyan chapter 6 . 7/14 Before last sentence: Man this chapter was really good with politics. Nice. After last sentence: OH SHIT! |
| xenosaiyan chapter 4 . 7/14 This is friggin awesome! THANK YOU FOR THE BASHIN ON THE THIRD HOKAGE! |
| xenosaiyan chapter 2 . 7/14 Oh Sherlock Holmes reference! Nice! |
| xenosaiyan chapter 1 . 7/14 I'm so..what... This... THIS MAN IS DEATH HELP! Awesome story dude you are Zuzushi :) |
| Kingmaker chapter 1 . 7/12 Okay, so I'm coming here as a fan of FFD, wondering what exactly is causing all the delays. I've read some good Naruto fics before, and plenty of bad ones. Worst of all, I've read ones I initially loved, then grew a taste, and saw they were shit (talking about PL here). And while I'm willing to give the benefit of doubt...I'm not feeling very confident here. Frankly, the OC gods are kind of... extremely cringy, Naruto's a bit OOC and foul mouthed, and the allusions to all the future pop culture references are...again, cringy and not funny at all. But I'll try, because I know I like FFD. I can't guarantee more than 200000 words read if it doesn't improve though. Really, really hoping it does...but yeah. |
| Flamarow chapter 2 . 7/12 Hinata's viewpoint in this chapter was amusing and quite useful for highlighting the changes in Naruto later. Of course, all the little stories that you wouldn't normally hear about were also a marvelous touch. :D Already things are changing! Think about works of art and a hotel disappears! |
| Guest chapter 32 . 7/6 Sakura is weak it laughable you trying make her strong in your story it's pathetic |
| Guest chapter 32 . 7/6 This story was amazing till u try make sausuke and the pink haired bitch a couple did u not read or watch the anime manga he has no romantic interest in sakura it's a forced ship in naruto why the fuck are you writer of naruto fan fiction so fucking dense to write a unhealthy relationship like it healthy |
| Guest chapter 30 . 7/5 Naruto why are you lying to sakura sasuke despises her he hates her existence he likes karin you know your cousins he has feelings for her not the pink haired monster |
| Guest chapter 28 . 7/5 Sasuke and sakura are the worst couple ever I don't see how people ship them together it disgusting |
| Owen Copper chapter 33 . 7/2 This shit is gooooooood. All hail the holy log in all its holy logness for creating this logy amazing fanfic. Amen. |
| fanreader18 chapter 27 . 6/30 I have found the perfect person to compare Ghost to...Deadpool |
| fanreader18 chapter 25 . 6/30 THE REFERENCE! |