Realy impressed with this chapter. Keep it up!

I feel horrible for them. Ugh Aro sucks.

ITs always hard to read Jacob's major let down,its always sad. But Im glad Edward held firm and made Charlie understand how he felt. Can't wait for more!

Loved Jacob's reaction ) Not too crazy not too lovesick. Renee's reactions are always interesting, can't wait for the next update.

babe, 3 forever and ever.

This chapter is so good. I love Charlie and how he laughs in the end, and I love Edward here... sigh... it's beautiful.

I love this story. Wow. Aro’s Heir is excellent; the unique plot and your superb writing if fantastic! I like the way you use the dates and asterisks to separate conversation and periods of time. It’s very helpful as a reader.

The first chapter was so sad and horrifying. I'm sure it was difficult to write. I am so glad that Bella and Edward are working together to move past it and are able to forgive one another. It could have driven them apart and I do appreciate that you took the path that drove them closer together. I don't think my heart could have taken the alternative :o)

I am curious though if Alice's request to Jasper and the rest of the family is due to a vision that shows it will not turn out well for the Cullen's or if she's truly let it go...

Another beautiful story. I’m a fan of “Simple” as well – I love it - and I’m now off to read “Three Hours at the MVD.” Thanks for posting.

By the way, did you draw the picture on your homepage? It’s absolutely gorgeous.

I love this story. I feel like you captured Aro perfectly in the eartlier chapters. I wonder what he's going to do to retaliate? Very well written, and interesting plot. Update soon!

Gah, I hate Jacob so much I just wanna vomit every time he shows up in a story. He is such a child and thinks that his way is the only way. Loved Charlie's thoughts about Edward. So Bella's not pregnant yet, I guess they will have to try again after the wedding. Great chapter, thanks for the updates!

Oh, this was such a cute chapter! The Jacob and Charlie finding out one! And no yuckers! Great job!

~Jazz~

So far, this story has been amazingly awesome. Please post the next chapter soon!

Please?

I like how you handled the Charlie situation. Thanks for updating, it's really great!

I think it's cool that you made Jake actually let them be friends. It's different.

That was great. It stayed true to the original plot to a point, but then held it's own. Great story!

Okay so I have reviewed on twilighted and emailed you - so you know my love of this story!

But I'll be adding your story to my lists of tweets, and frankly pimp outs...i just LOVE this story!

Um...I hope that Alice has seen that the Volturi have decided to do "something" with the Cullens and that Edward really needs to bite Bella NOW. Since Aro has forseen Bella being so powerful, they could obviously fight the Volturi! Of course, this is your story and I do enjoy what you have written so far (I'm glad the pregnancy didn't pan out the first time, as the circumstances of the conception were so wrong).