Reviews for Aro's Heir
HannahJackie chapter 5 . 7/28/2009
This story is really interesting. Its sad, but good at the same time.
iFlipForRizzles chapter 4 . 7/25/2009
What the hell happened? She can't possibly have her period! And I don't recall anything about spotting during pregnancy... unless I'm wrong. I thought she was gonna throw up or something. Please update again soon, this was a really cute chapter! It's nice that they're getting so close again and relaxing before this thing spirals out of control.

~Jazz~
stavanger1 chapter 4 . 7/25/2009
There's so much going on in this chapter. I love how they're growing closer, I love how unconventional their enganement was, yet it was perfect for them.

Jane makes me mad, just... gr... and the end, since I know what's coming? So very sad...

You are a genious :)
sweetberry14 chapter 4 . 7/24/2009
What the hell!"Can I take this off""Can i kiss you?Here?" What was that if was f*cking hilarious i know it was probably a serious type of thing but still it was so funny.
Just Another Phase chapter 4 . 7/24/2009
O.M.G.! SHE'S PREGNANT! Holy Hale...

It's weird how I have to forget everything that I read already that happened after New Moon and you're making a new reality. I'm not sure I've read a story where I've had to do that, but I can tell you that I am really enjoying your take on things. I am VERY interested to see where you're going with it...

A CLIFFIE!
polyphany chapter 3 . 7/24/2009
Amazing story so far, I can't wait to read more!
daphne02 chapter 3 . 7/22/2009
wow, this is a great story. Very unique scenario, I can't wait to read what happens next!
iFlipForRizzles chapter 3 . 7/21/2009
Oh, that was so sweet! I hope he remembers that day when he sees how quickly the pregnancy goes, when she's lying there nearly dead. Please update again soon!

~Jazz~
stavanger1 chapter 3 . 7/20/2009
Aw, you know how much I love this story, and I do, more than I can say.

There is something so beautiful with this storyline, even if it's tragic in the beginning, and the way you weave it all together?

Amazing at it's fullest!

3
Just Another Phase chapter 3 . 7/20/2009
I really like the AU changes here...

I LOVED the "I remember" paragraph from Bella. At least she's not letting Edward beat himself up and be all Emoward on her overreacting like the Edward we know and love...

I really like the way they're talking more, still working out their reunion and the Italy drama...

LOVE IT! Can't wait for more! I'm so glad this story was rec'd and that you agreed to put it up on FFn!

Thanks!
stavanger1 chapter 2 . 7/19/2009
You know I love this, and I'm so happy you brought it over to FF.

This story is one of the most amazing ones out there. So very good.
J chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
Awesome! Love it.
elljayde chapter 2 . 7/18/2009
Really good story concept can't wait to read more
unknown profile chapter 2 . 7/17/2009
please update again soon! i cant wait to see what will happen
iFlipForRizzles chapter 2 . 7/16/2009
Oh gosh, this story is so sad! Please update again soon! Poor Masen, he's gonna grow up thinking that his parents didn't want him, ABANDONED him to the Volturi! Poor kid! I know the feeling sometimes, though not quite under those circumstances. And rape is like, the worst possible crime! And they were LAUGHING! Please update again soon, I wanna know what's gonna happen!

~Jazz~
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