Reviews for May and Drew A Journey Together CANCELED
ScarletUmbreon chapter 5 . 10/15/2011
Please, Please, PLEASE! Make another chapter! PLEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSEE! K, bai! :3
riddledemort chapter 5 . 8/10/2011
This story always make me smile. Mae Mae is adorable, I want to pinch her cheeks badly and update soon will ya? 3 this fanfic.
Chri chapter 5 . 6/19/2011
Yay your story's the best! I love all your jokes, especially when all that stuff happens to Drew and May because of you and Ash! Do us all a favor and post the next chapter, pretty pretty please!
BlackRoselia337 chapter 5 . 4/26/2011
You already got twenty reviews so can you post the next chapter already?
BlackRoselia337 chapter 5 . 4/26/2011
You already got twenty reviews so can you post the next chapter already?
anonymus chapter 5 . 2/10/2011
I liked this chapter but the cussing was a little much... not that I don't agree or anything. May and Drew are such a cute couple! I can't wait to read the next part! YOu should make a good permenent villan though, people will sometimes get tired of the "mean girl" so you should find a nice love rival for Drew. Just to keep things interesting. I can see you haven't updated since July so please let my really long review count as the rest you need ok? And if you ever need help say so in a short chapter so I can give you ideas. May and Drew are my favorite Poke'mon characters.
xFlipJamsx chapter 5 . 1/11/2011
please update the story. i would like to know what happens.
LoveLoverGrl chapter 5 . 11/7/2010
come on you have 20 reviews so now update _
Brucer chapter 5 . 9/10/2010
Omg! You can update noaw!

It's a great story, so please continue!
xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 5 . 8/3/2010
what a bitch the bitch, and what a stalker, i say he report her to the cops so he'll be in quiet!

please UPDATE really soon!

Morapores chapter 5 . 7/28/2010
Well good job :D I like it

Using more POV's let you be able to see what the characters are thinking, or what a character thinks another character is thinking.

I don't know you should keep Ash in the story, it makes it more weird. He does add humor to the story though.

Get Mae Mae to try to get Drew and May together constantly, as I'm pretty sure it's contestshipping.

Or another idea with Ash is to get him to meet Misty in Cerulean.

You also probably should have many scenes with May and Drew alone. It would probably be weird if Ash and Mae Mae are constantly with them. I will fab and follow this story and give more advice in the future. :D
Morapores chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
I lawled at the part when Mae Mae said meeting a special green haired someone. I kinda picture her as a 5 year old saying a special green haired someone O.o
big big misty fan chapter 5 . 7/16/2010
its really good but we need a little POKESHIPPING!
Moonlight's Shadow Warrior chapter 5 . 7/15/2010
Good chapter. I absolutely love Mae Mae right now. She's awesome! Anyway, keep on writing.

-PokeGirlMisty :D
beingVague chapter 5 . 7/15/2010
please update soon! i wish they would let me review more than once, but they won't
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