This is such a fantastic story! I have read it twice now and I think you did such a good job. I can't wait to read the sequel!

I liked this quite a lot. Just a couple of comments, Amanda seems pretty immature, and Sarek moves way too fast. Unless he's in a situation where he needs a wife in about a week, I think he'd take a little more time to get to know her. That said, I still look forward to the sequel!

Yay! Thank you! I glad you are going to continue with Amanda and Sarek's story.

Thank you

Thank you! I hope they get to meet up and have a talk soon.:)

I can't wait to see Sarek. Just like stuffy Vulcans to punish him for breaking the rules instead of thanking him for saving people.

An intriguing plot indeed, and you progressed it so well. Your writing has tightened up a great deal making this a better read as it goes, and the action sequences show great promise. Overall this is very enjoyable and Amanda's constant messups when faced with Sarek are hilarious, showing her reverting to nervous teenagerhood far too often for her comfort!
I think your technology descriptions need a little more thought - this is a couple of centuries from now so somehow I doubt recharging will be an issue. A couple of descriptions of Amanda's behaviour don't quite tie in with her as an adult and teacher, even under the sort of distress you describe. Imo that's quite different from her reaction to Sarek. Also, if her sister and parents were able to hide their real lives from her so professionally, you might need to rethink some of Doris's reactions to David in light of this also.
Looking forward to the resolution, a lot!

Loving this so far - you've got interesting characters who are driving the plot well. Your Amanda is well crafted and her flaws work to her advantage making her more real.
I'd replace 'light metal device' with 'padd' as your readers will immediately understand what it is. Imo 'device' is too easily misconstrued thus a tad clumsy in what is otherwise a well written piece.

Thanks for updating! Can't wait to see what happens...

thanks for the update

Really, really loved this update! Can't wait til Sarek catches up with them. Please update again soon!

I would not have thought her dad would give the key to Amanada for safekeeping. I know life happens. It has been yrs (or maybe at least a year) since you posted. I probably should brush up from Chap 1. But I do not have a lot of free time. I had a actually given up on hoping you would continue this story. Do you think you will be have the time to have less spaced apart updates? lol
Bina

Thank you

I know it's been a long, long time, but please finish the story? This is such an evil cliff hanger and I'm dying to see what happens.

I'm sad this hasn't been updated in a while.