Reviews for Heroes Across Time Abridged
JensenDaniels32 chapter 7 . 1/27
XD
JensenDaniels32 chapter 5 . 1/27
Wait...why doesn't Naruto just use his jutsu to...I dunno, smash boulders, kill Dodongos, kill Dragons, ect.? Rasenshuriken works, or did you switch all of his jutsu over to a limited amount of magic...?
KrisB-71854 chapter 4 . 10/14/2015
O.k. Naruto does have the ninja skills. He has some how become a kitsune which works.

I'm sort of mixed on Lina. At first, they had a cool friends with benefits thing, now she is going all yandere on him for hooking up and making passes at others.

Oh well at least she actually has a legit reason.
KrisB-71854 chapter 2 . 10/14/2015
Well, they are certainly marking spots as they go.

Hmm, I wonder if Naruto is an actual ninja in this one. It could actually fit.
KrisB-71854 chapter 1 . 10/14/2015
This is the most interesting Naruto/Zelda cross that I've ever read. It rocks.
Argorok chapter 21 . 8/3/2013
Excellent job so far, if you get a chance can you please update this story again soon?
zwlda31 chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
curouis what happened to the original version of this story?
Lucky Ryuujin chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
No offense, but I preferred the original. Where can I read that?
Have a Little Feith chapter 21 . 3/6/2013
I lol'd at the end. Not the petition end, I mean the story.

Hope this updates again soon.
Toby860 chapter 21 . 12/20/2012
alright. i still look forward to you continuing this story.
foxeatfox chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
I would be more encouraged to read this story, if you did not have grammar errors in your summary.

"Does under age 18 do not read."

Should be "Do not read if under 18." or something of the sort.

You really need to get a beta or at least read over your work. I'm sorry if you think this is a flame but I'm going more for constructive criticism.
soulofdragon1 chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
hmmmmm
Insomniac-Gaara4488 chapter 21 . 11/7/2011
Great story so far! it's gotten a little weird lately!
Elemental Dragon Swordman chapter 21 . 11/6/2011
Lol. That is gonna be an amusing sight Naruto and Lina stumble upon in the morning.
Ultimate-Zelda-fan chapter 20 . 8/23/2011
LMAO Master of all snack cakes!
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