Reviews for Test of Trust
Jadestar1981 chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Wow this is really your first fanfic? I wouldn't have guessed, you did a really great job there.

And I don't think it's too out of character for Lisbon to act like this and go to a bar to get loose - I mean everybody needs to do that every once in a while.

And that you have her call Jane when she needs help - just wonderful (well, I'm a shipper for Jisbon - can't help it)!

I hope you continue writing!
Zassie x chapter 1 . 7/15/2009

Its complete? No, you should continue this! Its really good :D

You actually *need* to add more on, I kinda' felt like it ended to soon!

The next bit could be Jane going with Lisbon to the hospital and comforting her, and helping her bust the guy, I wanna' read about Jane punching Micheal in the face! That would be good ;)

Continue! Or else...:P

I shall be waiting ;) x
mwalter1 chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Cool story - Jane to the rescue and being a good friend.
melrose465 chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
i loved it awesome story
LiveLoveLaughLife chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Aw! I'm so glad Jane saved her. Poor Lisbon :(. Great job, I really like this! :)
stayshiny chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Wow, that was really good!
Miz24601 chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Nicely done! Congratulations on your first "Mentalist" fic. . .had you not mentioned it was your first, I never would have guessed. Your style is one of a seasoned fanfic writer!

This story is well-crafted and thought out. I also think you did a good job of keeping the characters' voices pretty true to the ones we've gotten to know on screen. I was never taken out of the moment thinking "he/she would never, ever say that."

I really enjoyed this and look forward to reading more Mentalist stories by you! (So, please write more. :-)
PhoenixWytch chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
This is a fantastic friendship story!

Thank you for writing.
Tiva4evaxxx chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
That was brilliant!

You need to write more Mentalist fan fics, after you UD this of course :P

That really was great.

Divinia Serit chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
YAY! I'm so proud! Congrats on your first fic! I really enjoyed it and i think you did a good job keeping them in character. It's fun to put them in different situations and see how they react! I love that Jane was able to find her in time, and that he was smart enough to help her build evidence. I loved her reasoning for going. She knew it was out of character for her to do what she did, but they way you explained it made it fit perfectly. We all want to let go at some point! Poor Lisbon! I'm so glad she has Jane :) Great job! Can't wait to read more from you! It's addicting once you start receiving those reviews :D
Madaboutthementalist chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
I really liked this. It's nice to see the trust building in their relationship.
JocelynMcC chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
I'm so glad you posted this. I liked it very much. :) xxJo
restless-mess chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
I still love it! Great job hun :)
savingxgrace chapter 1 . 7/15/2009


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