Reviews for Lunar Eclipse
jk chapter 1 . 6/2
I'm confused...when in the fuck did Jessica get pregnant? whos the dad? why in the hell would a teen mom GIVE a car away? why would bella think someone would sell her a car for $200?
Mechcat chapter 12 . 1/9
When you write burettes, I'm pretty sure you mean barrettes for Bella's hair. The chances that Edward would give her glassware normally used in chemistry to put in her hair seems quite low. Especially given that it is Bella, in a house with 7 vampires.

The idea of the Cullen crest being on barrettes is novel, and a neat one for Bella. I don't think I've seen that before.

Thanks for sharing your fic with us!
J.DRAST chapter 18 . 10/5/2014
Hello. I totally enjoyed your story here. My favorite part was when Edward arrived while Bella was in cardiac arrest and he kept saying "Try again Carlisle. Try again." Just picturing his anguish...I feel that you portrayed it exceptionally well. Thank you for entertaining me today. Suzan Noerr
maymay74 chapter 18 . 9/17/2014
:) :)
maymay74 chapter 13 . 9/17/2014
I liked the idea of a vampire blinding Alice.
maymay74 chapter 6 . 9/17/2014
:)
maymay74 chapter 3 . 9/17/2014
So Jake hasn't phased, he didn't notice Edward.
maymay74 chapter 2 . 9/17/2014
:) They have her!
maymay74 chapter 1 . 9/17/2014
I'm feeling a bit bad about Jessica. But I'm so glad Alice is going to the rescue
jeangary28 chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
Interesting twist on new moon and interesting start
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 2 . 10/6/2012
Nice chapter.
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Interesting start to the story. I look forward to reading more soon.
Edward'sDJ chapter 18 . 5/3/2012
Thank you for sharing this lovely story with us.
Edward'sDJ chapter 17 . 5/3/2012
Fabulous chapter.
Edward'sDJ chapter 16 . 5/3/2012
Edward's attitude is very disempowering for Bella.
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