Reviews for A Beautiful Mistake
Brown-Eyed-Girl247 chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
aw! it was so cute :) really loved the story
PutteringPoet chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
Loved it! :)
thatgirlray chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
That was too beautiful... wow.
Red Bess Rackham chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Cute fic. I have to say it felt a bit long for a oneshot as much of it came off as repetitive - the cuddling and professions of love. I'm not knocking fluff, but like I said, it began to feel fairly repetitive.

The other thing I noticed was that this was difficult to read b/c of the way you have your paragraphs set up. It'd be much easier to go through if the dialogue was separated properly.

I really liked the cuteness of her still wearing the plaid shirt after so long, and when she admitted she loved him. Again, overall cute, but I think it needs some serious fine-tuning if you want more people to stick though the whole thing. :)