|Reviews for Humpty Dumpty|
| alef chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
I love the way you use words.
| TheTwoDragonsQueen chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
hey i like this story its aeswome
| DreadPirateSephy chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
Heh heh. I like the way you handled such a potentially awkward subject and made it funny and sweet at the end. And I loved the Humpty Dumpty bit too. Great job! Thanks for helping me start the day smiling! :)
| Moonlit Crystals chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
) I liked it. I enjoyed reading something a bit different. You should write CloTi more. xD
| mom calling chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Based on the evidence here in this ficlette, I'm glad you're back and I hope you have more wry pearls to share. I'm still kinda wondering if this was a lucky night-I think so, but mebby not...but it sounds like it's not about scorecards anyway. Being close, safe, sharing which must include cuddling as they are comfortable with each other-those are the things that matter now. Sometimes I forget how young they really are, and how busy they've had to be and still are...time to pull my head out of my daydream and get on with this day... thx mc
| Kainos Ktisis chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
I usually wouldn't even bother reading a fic that mentions sex in the summary (call me a prude or plain traditional or whatever else you'd like), but something in your summary told my gut that this wasn't gonna be plotless smut. Or maybe I just liked the title...Lol. In any case, instinct proves correct once again because this fic was a lot deeper than expected. Hence why I liked it.
I just gotta say: good choice with dispensing of the sap and going for the wry humor. That's definitely one of the major reasons I liked this fic and it most certainly sets it apart from the majority of other Cloti fics out there. Maybe because it's more realistic. I like how you show that things don't magically become better when all the world crises are over, that they're still broken and that they still have to heal. I also liked the fact that they didn't become sex gurus out of the blue. Somehow, those never really struck a chord with me, though as with everything, there are good enough writers out there who can make it work.
Anyhow, good job with this fic!
| Rukichigo93 chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Lol... they're embarassed