Reviews for Fatherly Summons
deceiving-light chapter 3 . 7/4/2012
Yay! Draco topped! :3 I love the story do far! I'm not done yet but I just felt like reviewing!
Nihtingale chapter 10 . 12/26/2010
Why couldn't Emma removed the dark mark from her father?
Nihtingale chapter 2 . 12/26/2010
lol, those two has way too much energy. but entertaining lol
TheNightmareBeforeDawn chapter 9 . 12/20/2010
snake, definitely snake.
TheNightmareBeforeDawn chapter 8 . 12/20/2010
yes, who IS Annalise?
TheNightmareBeforeDawn chapter 6 . 12/19/2010
noooooo! why harry?
TheNightmareBeforeDawn chapter 5 . 12/19/2010
is it gone? and the mark spoke to him... strange...
TheNightmareBeforeDawn chapter 4 . 12/19/2010
poor Harry...
TheNightmareBeforeDawn chapter 2 . 12/19/2010
Lucius, the poor, poor man... well for him anyway, i'd LOVE to see that. haha
TheNightmareBeforeDawn chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
haha cracked up laughing at the part where Lucius walks in on them... 'Where the hell is my pensieve?' hahahaha
Kristgen and Sherlock chapter 4 . 12/6/2010
Me and my husband loovve this story, we love it so much you've inspired us to write our own. We found the bit with Lucius seeing them having sex so funny it reminds us of when we were teenagers and my gay pride braclet got caught in my husbands zipper just as my mum walked in. We well and truely scarred her. All our love Kristgen and Sherlock xxx.
Aeromance chapter 11 . 8/5/2010
I did not get the Lion King quote - sad day. No chocolate cookies for me.

Hm, I can't remember if I've reviewed this story before so I don't know if the general things I say will be redundant. Sorry, if I'm repeating myself.

I like your sex, I really do. Sometimes its eh... but quite often its like ":O" in a good way. The stripping all the time is a bit odd. Especially in semi public places. On that note, lotsa a sex in semi public places is also kinda odd but who am I to judge.

So that's not really a critique I think. Just odd.

The last few chapters (once Harry got the mark) felt off. I can't really think of a great way to describe it but it felt kinda rushed and unrefined. Like you were in a hurry to get to the end or publish the next chapter for your readers. Not necessarily sayings its bad but it feels like a tone shift almost. Not much a criitique either because I can't place my finger on what's up.

Psychic magic? Is that your way of refering to wandless magic or the magic of the mind and soul?

On to the happy stuff! :D

Characterizing Lucius and explaining why he got the dark mark and why he might be coolio with joining with Harry was great.

Little sister is an interesting twist. She's adorable, too. And adorable is ALWAYS welcome.

I'm drawing a blank. I'm so sure I had other things to say, though. Aw, well. I'm sure you want me to shut up by now.

So, good story, yeah? Keep writing and being my sexy tiem fix.

Much fanfic love,

~Aeromance
mjmusiclover chapter 11 . 7/25/2010
very beautifully done :D
Troypayisbetter chapter 11 . 7/24/2010
OH NO! Death eaters! I hope they get away...and I cant wait to read the first chapter of the sequel...im glad you're writing it. :D...I think this was amazing...and I dont think Ive ever been so invested in a fanfiction before...so I have to give u props. Great job! And you should know because of this you are oficially one of my favorite authors. :D GREAT JOB! I love the whole 'Malfoy Rules' and Harry and Draco's realtionship...its sweet. Great job!
KlainePotter chapter 10 . 5/26/2010
It's a great story! I can't wait for the next part!

PS. What's the quote? I couldn't figure it out and it's killing me!
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