Uh...nope, that's not Tom Riddle. Way, way too OC.

Well, this story does stand out in one way - it's total crap. I don't think I have ever read an HP story that was so farfetched in so many ways. You take the cake on this one.

You know that's just plain B.S. No one but Dumbledore was keeping track over what was or wasn't happening at the Dursley's house. How could you write a story where Harry is so horribly abused but then make out like it isn't Dumbles fault?

At least you finally explained the confusion about the wand.

Umm, so who did the wand belong to? It sounds like Harry hid both his wand and his invisibility cloak in that hidden space under the floorboards under his bed. Is that correct? Are we going to find out or did you just expect us to figure that out from what you wrote in this chapter?

Ok, I can't help saying something because it's driving me crazy. It is SNAPE not SNAPES. There is no S on the end of his name.

And, although I like this story so far, I have to ask if English is not your first language because there are a LOT of mistakes in this story.

The wand is not a mistake? Then what wand was McGonagall holding, her own?

Hedwig is probably dead.

Yeah you should have checked on him! This is on your head!

Umm, WHEN is this taking place? I figured it was the summer after third year but there are students in the Great Hall. Harry never went back to the Dursley's during Christmas or Easter break so WHEN was this supposed to be happening?

OMG! This sounds like the worst case of abuse I have ever read in an HP fanfiction story. Harry needs to go to St. Mungo's but is Sirius still a wanted fugitive? Does he still have a 'Kiss on sight' on him? If so, how 8s Sirius going to be able to get him help?

Wow ... what a complete 180 this fic took. So confusing!

But I'll be honest, the ends of the Dursleys were INSPIRED! Thanks for those, as creepy as they were. LOL

I am so very confused ...

Bullhockey! He's a silver tongued devil and I don't believe he's good, not for anything. Especially because you have written NO changes in The Chamber of Secrets storyline into this story. That and after seeing Malfoy and Fudge's conversation about his secretary, ugh! No, just, no!

How the heck does this end in two chapters?

Yikes! Glad Trouble is okay, but who the heck took Harry and Hermione?

Noooooooooooooo

*gag* Whoa ... NEVER tick off a house elf!

Wow, that was so very gross, but deserved! Will Dobby find Vernon and Petunia, too? *curious*

Well crap!