|Reviews for A Broken Child|
| peggy77 chapter 17 . 5/15
Uh...nope, that's not Tom Riddle. Way, way too OC.
Well, this story does stand out in one way - it's total crap. I don't think I have ever read an HP story that was so farfetched in so many ways. You take the cake on this one.
| peggy77 chapter 8 . 5/14
You know that's just plain B.S. No one but Dumbledore was keeping track over what was or wasn't happening at the Dursley's house. How could you write a story where Harry is so horribly abused but then make out like it isn't Dumbles fault?
At least you finally explained the confusion about the wand.
| peggy77 chapter 6 . 5/14
Umm, so who did the wand belong to? It sounds like Harry hid both his wand and his invisibility cloak in that hidden space under the floorboards under his bed. Is that correct? Are we going to find out or did you just expect us to figure that out from what you wrote in this chapter?
| peggy77 chapter 5 . 5/14
Ok, I can't help saying something because it's driving me crazy. It is SNAPE not SNAPES. There is no S on the end of his name.
And, although I like this story so far, I have to ask if English is not your first language because there are a LOT of mistakes in this story.
The wand is not a mistake? Then what wand was McGonagall holding, her own?
| peggy77 chapter 4 . 5/14
Hedwig is probably dead.
| peggy77 chapter 3 . 5/14
Yeah you should have checked on him! This is on your head!
| peggy77 chapter 2 . 5/14
Umm, WHEN is this taking place? I figured it was the summer after third year but there are students in the Great Hall. Harry never went back to the Dursley's during Christmas or Easter break so WHEN was this supposed to be happening?
| peggy77 chapter 1 . 5/14
OMG! This sounds like the worst case of abuse I have ever read in an HP fanfiction story. Harry needs to go to St. Mungo's but is Sirius still a wanted fugitive? Does he still have a 'Kiss on sight' on him? If so, how 8s Sirius going to be able to get him help?
| Duchess67 chapter 19 . 4/7
Wow ... what a complete 180 this fic took. So confusing!
But I'll be honest, the ends of the Dursleys were INSPIRED! Thanks for those, as creepy as they were. LOL
| Duchess67 chapter 18 . 4/7
I am so very confused ...
| Duchess67 chapter 17 . 4/7
Bullhockey! He's a silver tongued devil and I don't believe he's good, not for anything. Especially because you have written NO changes in The Chamber of Secrets storyline into this story. That and after seeing Malfoy and Fudge's conversation about his secretary, ugh! No, just, no!
How the heck does this end in two chapters?
| Duchess67 chapter 16 . 4/7
Yikes! Glad Trouble is okay, but who the heck took Harry and Hermione?
| Duchess67 chapter 15 . 4/7
| Duchess67 chapter 14 . 4/7
*gag* Whoa ... NEVER tick off a house elf!
Wow, that was so very gross, but deserved! Will Dobby find Vernon and Petunia, too? *curious*
| Duchess67 chapter 13 . 4/7