Reviews for A Broken Child
Secre chapter 10 . 9/27/2019
You could do with reading back through this story as there are numerous typos that pull you out of the tale which is a pity.
Wolvie26 chapter 19 . 9/24/2019
Love it!
SlytherinMonster120 chapter 15 . 9/15/2019
Damn Fawkes. Not even Dumbledore deserves to get mooned. Or should I say sunned?
SlytherinMonster120 chapter 12 . 9/15/2019
Can we send in Loki instead? That would be better. Oh! How about Hades himself?
SlytherinMonster120 chapter 9 . 9/15/2019
Jesus Christ. Even Voldemort is more worried than the Dursleys. And he wants the kid dead. I think humanity has lost it's mind today.
jeroen1758 chapter 19 . 5/4/2019
I'm trying to decide which was more heartbreaking, Harry's Manifesto or Voldemort's plight.

Great story!
Guest chapter 19 . 3/22/2019
good story
Guest chapter 1 . 3/18/2019
I didn't read this story b/c I don't get off on rape/abuse/torture esp. of kids but I did want you to know that links don't work in profiles here on anymore, so instead you might wanna update your profile with your links written in clumps with spaces here and there. Think: starslibrary dot net / name or, even easier, just tell us what your pen name is on what site...we'll find'ja!
Goose chapter 5 . 3/5/2019
Pointlessly edgy nonsense. You can't be any older than 15.
Guest chapter 19 . 3/1/2019
I’m not reading the rest of this, bad fic, sorry
Guest chapter 18 . 3/1/2019
You tried too hard to make tom look like the good guy we need to have sympathy about in just one chapter. Like, cmon, he says it got a little out of hand? How does it become a matter of blood purity instead of saving children? The difference between those two are so immense it just sound like an excuse to cover up the fact that he consciously went genocide
Guest chapter 17 . 3/1/2019
What is actually happening, like tom is good now but the others (the light) don’t know or does snape know or someone else like lucius and does he still want to kill harry, what about the prophecy? This is too confusing
Guest chapter 14 . 3/1/2019
Oh shit remind me to never piss of Dobby
Guest chapter 10 . 3/1/2019
I don’t think the French language has those symbols ‘-‘

I think you ment désolé, instead of d()sol(), (i don’t know how to type those symbols.)
If you have ever, just once in your life read French or seen it, you’d know that those translations aren’t the way it’s supposed to be. Atleast double check your translations, as some people find it the very least offending

I know, i know, “Ew guest review sends flames”. These are just some things i’d like to point out to you.
Malevon030 chapter 1 . 2/3/2019
rushed and I thought this story would be about harry's jeorney (spelling?) and we didn't even get to see his mind return to its former state and how that would affect him...
the story is interesting, but the fact that in the end harry becomes more like a side character annoys me.
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