Reviews for What the Heart Desires
Chrisstars1 chapter 2 . 3/27/2017
celajwhitney chapter 19 . 2/11/2017
great story!
celajwhitney chapter 15 . 2/11/2017
this was so well written i hated for it to end!
celajwhitney chapter 12 . 2/11/2017
edward is such a self centered egotistical idiot. and irina, how can she blame a human for the death of a vampire. laurent was hunting in the wolves territory when he knew it was forbidden and he was subject to being killed.
celajwhitney chapter 8 . 2/11/2017
jacob is such a putz! it's always about what he wants and he doesn't even listen when bella tells him how she feels. what a putz!
OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 1/31/2017
This look awesome
TinaF chapter 19 . 12/21/2016
Wonderful story! Thank you for sharing.
myharlequinromance321 chapter 19 . 1/7/2016
A very sweet story for an under-represented pairing. Thank you for writing this, best of wishes to you!
mfaerie32 chapter 3 . 11/6/2015
Stupid, pathetic human condition? Seriously? The way she viewed her own mortality in the books was VERY unhealthy. The fact that she was willing to give up all her family & friends to become immortal for a guy she had only known for a month was disturbing. Being human is the natural order. I always wanted to slap her when she talked about how horrible it was.
mfaerie32 chapter 2 . 11/6/2015
The whole idea of her and Jake being together in the books was ridiculous with the way Meyer set up werewolves. Bella was obviously not Jake's imprint. So what...they would be together & he would make her happy until he met his imprint and dropped her like a sack of garbage? Why did they not take the lesson from Sam/Emily/Leah. There was no way that Jake & Bella could have ever been a thing, so dragging that out was annoying as hell.
mfaerie32 chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
She was always so damn pathetic, needy, clingy, and had a low self worth with Edward. The way she put him on a pedestal as perfect was freakin' unhealthy. So any story where she's paired with anyone but him is a plus in my book.
griezz chapter 19 . 10/17/2015
Great story! I generally do prefer Emmett/Rosalie (Emalie?) but it was a nicely done take on an alternate pairing. Keep up the good work!
AmazingHefi chapter 19 . 10/15/2015
What happened with Charlie?
MinaChambers chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
I think your story was great. It had me both angry and excited for what's to come at the end of each chapter and is the only story I've read to the end in 5 months, so thanks for that. I admire your story.
Guest chapter 16 . 5/16/2014
It still kills me that you made Bella into Alice's submissive even after her change.
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