Reviews for What the Heart Desires
MinaChambers chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
I think your story was great. It had me both angry and excited for what's to come at the end of each chapter and is the only story I've read to the end in 5 months, so thanks for that. I admire your story.
Guest chapter 16 . 5/16/2014
It still kills me that you made Bella into Alice's submissive even after her change.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/29/2014
Good morning beautiful isn't by Tim McGraw it's by Steve holy
amelia chapter 2 . 8/9/2013
emmett is such a kind soul.
Guest chapter 11 . 4/5/2013
okay until this crap with edward won't read this chapter or any of the rest anymore its a shame i thought it would be a gd one
babygirl2928259 chapter 19 . 3/4/2013
love love love the story
babygirl2928259 chapter 18 . 3/4/2013
great chapter... love the story
Guest chapter 17 . 3/3/2013
awww that was sweet... love the story
babygirl2928259 chapter 16 . 3/3/2013
sweet...love the story
babygirl2928259 chapter 15 . 3/3/2013
love the story
babygirl2928259 chapter 14 . 3/2/2013
omg! i cant believe that even with the volturi there he is still trying to talk her out of being changed... love the story
babygirl2928259 chapter 13 . 3/2/2013
that was nice of jacob... love the story
babygirl2928259 chapter 12 . 3/2/2013
calm down bella damn... love the story
babygirl2928259 chapter 11 . 3/2/2013
omg! what now i dont think bella can take much more... love it
babygirl2928259 chapter 10 . 3/2/2013
omg! i cant believe edward would go as far as to dazzle her to get his way in this oh wait yes i can the ass... love the story
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