Reviews for If
Selene Illusinia chapter 3 . 3/18/2011
Very cute and well written.
NatesMama chapter 3 . 3/9/2011
Sometimes subtle is hotter than blatant. That was lovely and very hot. :)
xoxokiss210 chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
i loved:)
bonesparticulat chapter 3 . 2/14/2010
Beautiful, both regarding content and style. Thank you.
Nat D chapter 3 . 1/31/2010
I don't like pieces without dialogues.

But you made it work.

I've fallen for your stories ;)
Elia chapter 3 . 12/8/2009
THIS IS HOW IT SHOULD HAPPEN AMAZING
housexbonesobsession chapter 3 . 11/25/2009
Awesome! This was such a beautiful story. I love that what actually happened was a combination of what they both imagined. Amazing job.
khalek-aeryn chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
Dial the damn number women! :) Great story!
ginny1988 chapter 3 . 10/16/2009
WOW.
sweet psychologist chapter 3 . 8/23/2009
What an amazing story! You did a brilliant job of bringing everything together in 3 short chapters. Absolutely brilliant the way you shared each of their POVs and that each was actually the same. Gordon-Gordon was right: they are not opposites. They are the two halves of the same whole.
wireuk chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
We done. Great start. Can't wait to read the rest.
iamladyliberty chapter 3 . 8/19/2009
lovely, lovely, lovely stuff. very romantic, very unfolding, very warm. excellent work.

thanks for writing!
mkpint chapter 3 . 8/9/2009
Just found this story and wanted to let you know for your first time writing this type of fiction it was very good. The love scene was written perfectly to fit the tone of the story.
Wintersky17 chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
Wonderful!
Boneyo chapter 3 . 7/23/2009
i love this story! fantastic finish! I loved how you did both perspectives before the great finale, it was absolutely superb!
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